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Reviews for Just Submit 2

By : grugster
  • From StarrCrystal on May 01, 2011
    Yay!! I really love this story!!!
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  • From StillHorny on May 01, 2011
    Oh, I love how Hermoine tried to get out of multiple punishments!!!! The comment by the eldest was priceless.

    Hermoine does learn quickly how to control her mates when she must. Her distraction of Fenrin was very HOT!!!

    More, please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2011
    AWWW poor Hermione she was so confused, i love the fact that she didn't even know that she had claimed two more mates!!!! Can't wait for some Fenrir and Hermione action in the next chapter =)
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  • From circe266 on May 01, 2011
    Though of course I love the lemony chapters, I also enjoy these chapters where we learn more about how the pack works, and how Hermione fits in. You did a great job of showing each of her mate's diverse personalities with how you wrote their comments and actions: snarky Severus, slightly insecure Toric, supportive and tough Darius, etc. (I would love more interactions with the always yummy Yorik.)

    God, Fenrir is such a drama queen! I look forward to reading about how he 'reclaims his #1 spot' with his pup. LOL
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  • From ANON - april on May 01, 2011
    damn it just when I thought some smut at the end. lol.
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  • From ANON - reireii on April 29, 2011
    I just started reading Just Submit 1 & 2....all the scenes are so HOT and just love how the characters are turning out. Your an awesome author! :) Please please update again soon!
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  • From sbrande on April 24, 2011
    Another great chapter. Keep on writing and I will keep on reading.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From leValkyrie on April 24, 2011
    Great update as usual, and I am so intrigued by all these new characters. Sex with Roland did not seem that bad. I do think that Hermione will go for an another round with him if her reactions were a good indication. This Janto wolf seems very playful and fun. I'm thinking that Hermione has marked him as one of her regular mates now, which means that we will be seeing a lot more of him. Very excited. Great update and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From coopershawk on April 23, 2011
    Really enjoy your stories. Hope you and your beta's lives improve swiftly.
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  • From StillHorny on April 22, 2011
    As always, I love every new chapter...no matter how long I have to wait in between!!!

    I love that Hermoine does not always pick who others would expect.

    I am glad that Tara and Hermoine have at least come to understand each other. And even Roland is not so bad.

    Will Hermoine be required to bed each of the warriors for her clan, as Tara does?

    I patiently await your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - GuiltyPleasure on April 22, 2011
    This story is just so hot. I can hardly wait for it to be uploaded for each new chapter. Thank you for the wonderful story.
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  • From MalfoysBitch on April 22, 2011
    things definately are getting more interesting with every passing chapter!! Brill!
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  • From circe266 on April 22, 2011
    Mmm, that was yummy! I like that Hermione is most drawn to the men that treat her sweetly.

    Thanks for the new chapter.
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  • From dragongirl on April 21, 2011
    That was worst wild! Amazing and hot hot hot! Hey you keep them coming at your pace. We wait for them. Take care!
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  • From Rhodella on April 21, 2011
    I cant wait to read more of this. I started at about 10 last night, and could hardly stop reading it to sleep or eat :P.
    I really like the story and of course, the smut.
    Also the ideas in this are really interesting to me, especially with the werewolf hierarchy and that everyone is split up by their dominating or submissive sides, as well as the characters, and their responses to everything that's happening around them.
    Like, I said, I cant wait to read more. Also, if your beta reader finds herself unable to continue, I would be more than happy to beta read for you instead.
    Also, is the rest of the fic going to be solely based in the werewolf "house" and its grounds, or are there going to be any scenes in the future where they leave, to visit other packs, or visit somewhere in the wizarding community for any reason? It would be interesting to see, in my opinion.
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