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By : grugster
  • From ANON - theladykt on April 10, 2011
    tara seems bored. at least herm is fitting in better
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  • From purpleann on April 09, 2011
    I'm glad Hermione is warming up to Roland, and it was great to learn more about the Splinters and how they "level up." But I wish this chapter had more detail. Like what does Janto look like? How does Tara know Thalien so well? I feel like the chapter was cut off at the end there too, it just ended so abruptly. And I was confused about one part - were Toric and Radgar in the room watching, or was Hermione just remembering them? AS ALWAYS I'm looking forward to reading more, I just love this story! Are we going to learn more about what Roland meant about Darius and him acting like Hermione's sire? What does that mean?
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  • From dragongirl on April 09, 2011
    Roland! WOW That would be interesting. Darius, he is very sweet! Keep them coming this is so much fun.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on April 09, 2011
    Okay so here I am again waiting for the next chapter cause im so, excited to see what happens next, I cant WAIT to see what happens with Hermione and Roland. Update soon pleaseee pretty please.
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  • From circe266 on April 08, 2011
    Hmmm. From previous chapters, we know that Hermione doesn't want to be treated like a whore . . . but what does she think that trading favors for sex is?? You know how much I LOVE your story, but I have to say that Roland is a jerk (at least he has been in every interaction we've seen so far), and Hermione being manipulated into a "deal" to have sex with someone she doesn't like or respect seems to be making her into exactly what she was afraid of becoming. I guess that I'll keep my fingers crossed that Roland will develop some redeeming qualities, and treat her like worthwhile human being, not just like a conquest.

    Love the interaction between Tara and Hermione, and the sexy initiation.
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  • From StillHorny on April 08, 2011
    Oh please, oh please, oh please...discribe in graphic details why Hermoine could not watch the next two; "because she was too distracted"!!!!

    Also, let us know what happened with Draco, Neville and the others in the 'toy room'!!!

    More, please!
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  • From ANON - GuiltyPleasure on April 08, 2011
    I can't yet decide whether I'm okay with the idea of Hermione and Roland together. I think you can pull it off, and I like the direction you have started to head with their relationship.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2011
    I liked the talk between Hermione and Tara it was nice to see them friendly with one another. I wish there was more of the Hermione Roland action but i guess i have to wait until next chapter for that lol it is so hard to wait, your chapters are always so good!!!!!
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  • From MalfoysBitch on April 08, 2011
    Interesting chapter! Nice to see Hermione accepting her wolf!!
    Wonder what's the deal with her and Radar!!
    Update soon!!

    And I think people are just lazy with there updates!!
    Because as a writer you should know - people love to criticise!!
    And this story is still fantastic!
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  • From bloodshound on April 08, 2011
    yay! some story line with our smut... No that isn't a dig and so far you've got the balance between pretty good. It's just that some times i'm not in the mood for smut so i skip to the next story line bit... and this isn't a stab a your smut skills, which are awesome, it's just some times I'm not in the mood. *shrugs
    Thats just how i feel today
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  • From ANON - Xoburntofferings on April 08, 2011
    YAY!! I love this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - Artemis on April 08, 2011
    I am finding it difficult to like Roland I still hate him so much. I hate how he seems to be so unchanged by Hermione while the others are. Other wise, I am horribly in love with this story.
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  • From ANON - Ella on April 07, 2011
    Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase update soon *cries*.
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  • From purpleann on April 04, 2011
    Loved chapter 21 with everyone in the pool. Great for Hermione to have a little reunion with Toric AND get to meet Radgar finally! Great chapter, and as always, can't wait for more. :)

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2011
    I love Radgar and Toric they are deffinately great members of Hermione's harem lol it was good to see Draco and Nevile back I missed them, and Calan too I am glad Draco has forgiven him. Great chapter I can't wait for the next one =)
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