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By : grugster
  • From StillHorny on April 02, 2011
    Damn...that was SO hot!!!!! All of the subs (including Tara) being fucked in the pools. What an awesome chapter!!!

    I was getting so hot from all the rutting going on in ONE pool. Radgar and Toric we so manipulative of Hermione. Can I trade places with her...PLEASE!!!

    Don't keep us waiting too long for the chapter; please.
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  • From MalfoysBitch on April 02, 2011
    loved that last chapter! Wanting more fenrir! Missing him and his pack!!
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  • From circe266 on April 02, 2011
    Yum! What a deliciously lemony chapter. All of the pairings were lovely, especially Hermione and her two dominants. (And it was nice to see Calan redeem himself.)

    One thing that would be nice is if you could include more of what the dominants were thinking. Such as: had Radgar been thinking about Hermione since seeing her for the first time? Did he go to the pool with Toric in the hopes of hooking up with her? What does Toric think about the fact that he was raised 2 levels in status because of her? Was Roland watching from the other pool in envy?

    And a side question: why does she almost always pass out after sex? Won't she ever get to enjoy cuddling in the afterglow? ;D

    Thanks for another fun chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on April 02, 2011
    I loved it, it was sooooo goood. I love Neville and I just love Draco. Good chapter can't wait for the next one.
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  • From dragongirl on April 02, 2011
    Solid, handsome, sweet and hot!!!!!!!!!! The perfect combination.
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  • From ANON - Mimander on April 01, 2011
    this story is awesome!! I'm loving it!!! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - GuiltyPleasure on April 01, 2011
    Another great chapter, but I felt that in this one we didn't get to learn enough about the new characters.
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  • From ANON - Mira on March 31, 2011
    Very nice chapter) loved the promise of Hermione becoming a queen))
    But what about Neville and Draco? when are they coming back into the story?)
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  • From ANON - Ella on March 31, 2011
    UGH!!!!! PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!! I'M DYING HERE!!!!!!!!
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  • From rayhansd on March 29, 2011
    love Love LOVE this story! The entire structure of werewolf community is very well thought over but there isn't so much plot that it distracts for the wonderfully smutty sex. My only problem is just how much Hermione is out of character. Could we see the more intelligent side of Hermione now that she's pretty comfrotable in the clan?
    Please keep writing! I'm always checking for your speedy updates :)
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  • From ANON - lovers hatred on March 27, 2011
    when will neville be back in the syory?
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  • From MalfoysBitch on March 27, 2011
    OMG!! I love that she has a friend that she can talk to!
    I love the progression of this story. I love that Tara has helped her, by answering some of her fears and Darius has reinforced it.
    Amazing!!!!
    Cant wait for the next update!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 27, 2011
    great chapter i love the interaction between Hermione and Tara i am glad they have talk to each other now. Darus and Hermione being friends and able to talk to each other is great too. I can't wait for the next chapter =)
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  • From purpleann on March 27, 2011
    this was awesome! so great to meet Tara and Darius. I hope Hermione and Tara can be pals. It was nice seeing a little sweet moment between Tara and Roland. Hermione is such a bad girl...she is seriously going to get it one of these days. :) Nice that she found a friend in Darius. As always, can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From StarrCrystal on March 27, 2011
    Bravo! Bravo! I was wondering when Tara was going to make
    an entrance. And it was no problem at all. I was just a little
    confused. I really cant wait for Neville and Draco make another
    entrance in the story.
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