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By : grugster
  • From sbrande on March 27, 2011
    Awesome!

    Thanks for the newest chapter.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From StillHorny on March 27, 2011
    I like that Hermoine and Tara are now friends. Now maybe Tara can teach Hermoine how to let her wolf side control her more.

    It is good to have a friend to talk to who also still has to many of those 'pesky human' thoughts.

    I can see how 'the pup' can help make changes in the clan. Her comments to Ages are evidence of that.

    But the conversations with Darius was great. His comment for her to view her mates as her 'harem boys' and that 'they' are the whores for her was...PRICELESS!!!!!!!!!!

    More please...with lots of sex too!?!?!!?!?!
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  • From dragongirl on March 26, 2011
    That shows another face of Hermione......... The kind and caring............ Confused, hey in the world I can say that every body is confused........ LOL
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  • From ANON - Formerly Surprised Fan on March 26, 2011
    Ah, Darius is very sweet. He should get somebody (maybe Neville or Draco?) and feel happy. And yay for Hermione having someone to talk to!

    And that was definitely NOT what I was expecting Tara to be like. Although truthfully I shouldn't form an opinion on her right after something like that happened. I did think though Hermione was getting out of line when Roland came back and she just jumped him. Roland is an ass, but Hermione didn't give him a chance to react to Tara. It sucks that every time after Hermione is really happy, something blows up and she ends up getting told off and to stop listening to her human mind. X_X

    I am interested in seeing more of what Tara is like in the future...

    And I am still wondering what Neville and Draco are up to in here. XD I'm sure Neville isn't having that easy a time adjusting either, even if he isn't having as big a problem with his human mind.

    Yay for the update(s)! :)
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  • From circe266 on March 26, 2011
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I like that Hermione is still sassy and not afraid to stand up to the dominants, even if she is not always right. I like that Tara seems like an OK person.

    I don't particularly care for Roland's sense of entitlement, assuming that he should be a mate to Hermione even when he hasn't been appealing in the slightest. I hope that Ages is wrong and that Hermione doesn't ever take the rapist as a mate.

    I love Darius!! His pep talk to Hermione was very kind and informative. I confess that with the last chapter, I was beginning to be turned off by how Hermione did seem to be treated like a piece of meat, so I hope that this means that in the future, she will be treated with more respect.
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  • From ANON - GuiltyPleasure on March 26, 2011
    I love, love, love this story. You have the werewolf system so well thought out and each character and relationship is well developed. I can hardly wait for each new chapter!
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  • From bloodshound on March 26, 2011
    glad you explained that. Previously Mip and the subs did sound very 'piece of meat/ do what you're told, when you're told, how you're told or else.' It did seem a bit unblanced, despite the whole 'grow old and become an elder' thing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2011
    awesome story plz update it soon
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  • From ANON - soniab on March 22, 2011
    Oh no! You can't possibly leave us there? Hurry up and write the next chapter so I can read it.

    Am loving this story.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From ANON - Jessica on March 22, 2011
    :-( sad face. Why? Why do you do this, I just want to read the next chapter. This chapter was...I can't find the word, AMAZING, GREAT, EXCITING, I LOVED it. It was so hot with Yorik and Fenrir.Oh my goodness, amazing. I can't wait to see what happens with Tara. Keep it coming. I mean if there is a little Hermione and Ages and Tara I wouldn't mind, just saying,lol. I know we are not a that point but just saying,lol.
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  • From ANON - Eleanor on March 22, 2011
    Whatever you do, please please PLEASE do not make Hermione and Tara friends! Other than that, fantastic chapter as usual!!
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  • From leValkyrie on March 22, 2011
    So its been a long time since I've been able to read and review. This story is developing along nicely. I sometimes I think that I love the interaction between the members of the clan and the pack more than I like the smut scenes. Don't get me wrong, those are awesome too. Good job done. You always make me have to cut on the fan after I read them, but I like the plain interaction between the wolves more. I think because you're so detailed and the descriptions of their relationships are so rich, that I am in love with a lot of your characters. I'm interested to see where Darius comes in again, I love his cameo in this chapter. I'm hoping for redemption from Calan in Hermione's eyes. And from your description, I would love to fuck the shit out of Toric (pardon my vulgarity!). LMAO. Great update and I can't wait to see what Tara has done that she has to be thrown into the head alpha's quarters. I think this will also be a turning point in the relationship between Tara and Hermione. I can't wait to read what you have planned!
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  • From ANON - theladykt on March 22, 2011
    girl needs to learn when to shut up
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  • From StarrCrystal on March 21, 2011
    Hey why is it chapter 35 instead of 19? But other than that, this
    story was awsome as always. Cant stop reading this even if I
    wanted to
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  • From MalfoysBitch on March 21, 2011
    Oh, what is tara going to tell hermione?! What an intresting chapter! Cant wait for the next one!
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