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By : grugster
  • From dragongirl on March 20, 2011
    Poor Hermione .......... She better start behaving or she will be punish from left to right....... LOL
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  • From ANON - She Ain't No Blondie on March 20, 2011
    I love this little world you've created. It's definitely one of the more interesting AUs I've come across. I must admit sometimes it's so frustrating to see Hermione so submissive. Thank you for frequently updating; it's been a fun read.
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  • From scotsgirl on March 20, 2011
    I have read the first part of this story and really enjoying the second part and this is the first time I have reviewed the story which is silly of me, but you comment of Remus joining in really peaked my interest, it would be really great if you could bring him in.
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  • From StillHorny on March 20, 2011
    Oh, I have to tell you...I just LOVE this story. Your plot is moving along nicely. There is enought smut *lemons* to keep our naughty readers saiated at times.

    The part about 'any dominate' being able to punish the pup when she misbehaves, if no one of higher rank is around was...PRICELESS!!!!! Hermoine needs to let that sink in.

    Now, what is the issue with Tara? You have peeked my curiosity!
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  • From PoppyMLW on March 20, 2011
    Oh yeah! This meeting w/ Tara has been building for quite a while. I can't wait for the next chapter. Glad to see Sev again. Hope he gets time soon too.
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  • From circe266 on March 20, 2011
    Fenrir & Yorik, with and without Hermione, are so hot together. I was surprised and pleased by how you depicted the emotional side too. Nicely done!

    I feel bad for Hermione, though. It really sucks to be left out and treated like an inferior, especially after hearing from the Eldest that she is powerful. I look forward to reading how you have her adapt to her position.

    I also look forward to her getting to know Darius platonically, as it would be good for her to have more friends. (And her getting to know Radgar not-so-platonically!) I am also wondering what Tara will be like -- will she be a friend for Hermione? Or a frenemy?

    Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2011
    I love this chapter!! Yoric is like the cutest sub to Fenrir, and i am really glad we will be seeing Radgar again soon, that should be really interesting :) can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Ella on March 20, 2011
    Yey!!!! Yorik and Fen action!!!! Please update it soon *cries*.
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  • From ANON - colao on March 18, 2011
    I thoroughly enjoy reading your story and love just the thought of more.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on March 15, 2011
    Why!Why do you do this to me!!I love this chapter, at first I was just reading and all three good, good. But when I get to the next part with Fenrir and York I was so soooo excited, I have been looking forward to them so long that I had forgot,lol. I am so sad cause I wanted be able to read your story (if you update soon) into next week. :-(
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  • From purpleann on March 15, 2011
    LOVE the threesome at the end. Super hot with Yorik in the middle. It was so sweet how much he enjoyed it. :) Keep up the great work!
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  • From MalfoysBitch on March 15, 2011
    I love those two guys! They are just sweethearts!! Yeay! Fenrir! Cant wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2011
    Welcome back Fenrir and Yoric i missed you :) this chapter is awesome, i love the Hermione seducing Yoric scene it was great and i can't wait to see what happens with Radgar and the other warriors!!
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  • From ANON - No Longer Surprised Fan XD on March 15, 2011
    Thank you very much for the list at the top of the chapter! It does make things easier to understand when they are listed out like that.

    I am very happy to hear Neville will be coming back soon! I miss him. XD

    XD And oh Fenrir, he really does like dominating his pack, doesn't he? And his pack seems to like it very much too. I always find it interesting when he is having sex with people other than Hermione, it's very intriguing how he acts and thinks when he's with them (like how honored and over the moon Draco was when he was with him, and how confused Fenrir was at that). And yeah, I'm still wondering about Remus (it's WEREWOLVES, and he's the one I know best! XD But that's just me, I understand if he never shows up...). I am happy to hear Hermione is thinking of talking to Tara finally... I am wondering what she will be like. And I wonder what Hermione wants to talk to Darius about...? Or maybe I am forgetting something from the last chapter.

    Anyway, I look forward to reading more!
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  • From LauraMolly on March 15, 2011
    this is a great story... i love it!!
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