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  • From ANON - theladykt on March 15, 2011
    yumminess as always
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  • From circe266 on March 14, 2011
    Gah, that is so freaking hot, Fenrir dominating Yorik while Yorik takes Hermione, all at Hermione's request. I only wish that the chapter hadn't ended where it did! Even though Yorik isn't always the most sensitive werewolf, I hope he recognizes and shows his appreciation for how Hermione makes his secret desires come true.

    Re: the earlier part of the chapter, please don't have Hermione sleep with another old geezer -- I don't think that my gag reflex has recovered from the last encounter with Ages a couple chapters ago. My fingers are crossed that once she finishes her sexy encounter with Fenrir and Yorik, she will have a go at Radgar.

    Thank you for posting another great chapter!
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  • From Padfootsgrl on March 14, 2011
    Is it hot in here or is it just me?
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  • From StillHorny on March 14, 2011
    Hot, hot, and oh so damn HOT!!!

    It got hot in here the moment Yorik tossed Hermoine over his shoulder and didn't start to cool down until I started writing this review. This was a wonderful chapter.

    Thank you so much. More...please.
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  • From sbrande on March 14, 2011
    Another excellent chapter. I am following this story closely as I am enjoying it immensely.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From StillHorny on March 14, 2011
    Just finished chapter 17.

    ROFL!!!! Hermoine hyperventalating and having to use a paper bag to calm down. And the 'elder' woman with her cane and her attitude...that was just PRICELESS!
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  • From dragongirl on March 14, 2011
    Hot sexy and powerful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2011

    You Rock,

    Please keep going with this wonderful story.

    i cannot wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - jessica on March 14, 2011
    Great chapter keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - Less Surprised than before fan on March 12, 2011
    XD I read through this all now, and was disappointed--but only because I thought there were more chapters posted here already! This is a very interesting story (although I do admit, there are times I'm confused as to who is who (with the OCs) and what their role is. The female eldest was very funny... I loved her going off on Toric and hitting him with her cane! XD

    I am a little sad that Neville seems to be fading in to the background... I would like to hear more on how he is doing. Hermione is interesting, but I want to know what is going on with Neville and Draco as well. I know Hermione is the more powerful one, but especially after his first changing, I'm curious about how Neville is feeling and acting. Is he more comfortable? Is he like Hermione finding more people attractive? Or is he feeling lonely because Severus seems quite preoccupied with Hermione lately? I'm also curious about Tara... is she as bad as Draco says? Will we be seeing her?

    And as a totally random side note... especially at the mention of the wolfsbane, I am now really curious about Remus. How is he surviving in this new world with Voldemort? Is he going to find this clan? I know there is absolutely no hint that he's even alive in here, but since he's one of my favorites AND a werewolf AND originally turned by Fenrir, I can't help but be curious and wonder (I think he would totally be a sub... Remus is really not dominant at all). Speaking of not dominant.. I feel so bad for Morgan (especially after Fenrir mentioned how he was treated when initially brought into the clan). It is strange that he is so submissive yet considered a dominant.

    I look forward to reading more!
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  • From coopershawk on March 12, 2011
    Great stories. Really enjoy them. I'm a bit confused as to where Roland is in the hierarchy?
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  • From ANON - Surprised Fan on March 11, 2011
    I just have to say, I never really thought much of Neville as the center of a fic/chapter with sex.

    ...you have completely changed my opinion with this and the previous fic.

    *quickly goes to next chapter*
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  • From purpleann on March 09, 2011
    tooooooottttally loved this chapter! I love learning about the inner workings of the clan, and the pup's place in the grand scheme. I KNEW she was going to get in trouble, running about looking for Toric! The speech from the Elders was awesome, and very cute how she defended Toric to them. :) I can't wait until Fenrir and the rest wake up and hear about all this drama! Update soon please :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 09, 2011
    I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy this story. I especially liked this chapter. I'm glad somebody's on Hermione's side and not just pushing her around. :) Looking forward to the next update!
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  • From sbrande on March 09, 2011
    Another excellent chapter. Thanks babe.

    love Sonia :)
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