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By : grugster
  • From dragongirl on March 09, 2011
    This was fun, especially the last part........ Poor Ages and the other mates they will have their hands full with Hermione on board........... LOL
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  • From bloodshound on March 09, 2011
    well about time. No wonder poor My was confused. I'm glad there are people about who can guide her properly.
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  • From MalfoysBitch on March 09, 2011
    Omg! I loved that female eldist! She had me laughing! Fantastic chapter! I like that hermione is still herself, and stil quite a strong minded character! Its one of the things I really enjoy about her! Cant wait for fenrir to come back! Amazing chapter! Definately one of my favourites!
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  • From ANON - xoburntofferings on March 09, 2011
    YAY!! I loved the new chapter. And I like how the story is progressing. I can't wait to see where it goes.
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  • From PoppyMLW on March 09, 2011
    Yeah an update! The was helpful and I really enjoyed meeting the Eldest :-) The ideas are so original that I am always wanting more when I reach a chapters end. Thank you!
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  • From StarrCrystal on March 09, 2011
    Yay new chapter!!!!!! Loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 09, 2011
    oh my god it seriously makes my day when i see an update to your story, i love it so much!!! Toric is absolutely awesome and i love how Hermione went running to him to keep her safe. The elders are great too, Ages and Toric getting told of was hilarious, can't wait to see Fenrir, Severus and Yoric back in action :)
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  • From circe266 on March 09, 2011
    I love how the Eldest defended Hermione and intimidated the dominants. I can't wait to see how her mates and the other dominants have to learn to deal with a powerful, sexy sub.
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  • From sbrande on March 06, 2011
    Although there are tonnes of spelling mistakes in this story, and misused names of characters, I am riveted by it and can't wait for you to post more. The idea is a very original one.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From purpleann on March 06, 2011
    Toric was delightful, and it was awesome seeing him try to resist her attempts at seducing him. Loved the cuddling with Ages at the end, adorable. Can't wait until the boys are back from the infirmary! I want more Fenrir/Hermione/Yorik! LOVE that.
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  • From Citten on March 06, 2011
    I really,REALLY like Toric---he could be a lot of real fun later too (right?) i so love what those stupid mates of her's did :) i also am dying to find out what else is going to happen and i am so hoping that it will be soon!!! :) i wonder if her being in heat will follow that regular pattern or if like so many other things with her she will have that be different too. oh i hope that you will update soon so we can see what poor ages is dealing with having to wait ;)
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  • From leValkyrie on March 05, 2011
    I like Toric!!! He's a keeper! He seems like a very strong-willed person. He knew that he had to follow his orders. While many, possibly even Yorik, would have said screwed the orders and let's just fuck, Toric was adamant that he had a job to be done. On top of that, I love how he was almost gentle with Hermione in their lovemaking. My vote is yes! I'm also awaiting for the return and redemption of Calan! I know he can do better! LOL. Poor Fenrir, Severus, and Yorik. Like the saying goes, the road to hell is paved with good intentions. They tried so hard to do the right thing by taking the potion but they only ended up making the situation worse, causing somewhat of a makeshift hell for the clan. Not only are they sick and can't protect their clan, but Hermione's in heat and worrying herself sick. Seems like a good time for another clan to try and overthrow them right? LMAO *hint* Great update as always. I loved it!
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  • From MalfoysBitch on March 05, 2011
    Oh I just loved that last chapter! Love toric! He's brilliant,V.sexy!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on March 05, 2011
    Love it!Keep it coming, your story is the best. Great chapter as well.
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  • From circe266 on March 05, 2011
    Mmmm, I love Toric! He really knows how to take care of a horny pup.

    I am worried about Fenrir, Yorik, and Severus. I hope that they are OK in the next chapter. Although I wouldn't mind if Hermione, still in heat, got some action from Radgar, the Taye Diggs lookalike. (at least, that is how I imagine him, based on your description in the previous chapter)

    Thanks for the update!
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