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By : grugster
  • From ANON - Xoburntofferings on February 21, 2011
    Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
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  • From PoppyMLW on February 21, 2011
    This is my absolute favorite in progress fic. I check everyday for new updates. This fic is so original, and the dynamics in the huge set of character are amazing. Always at the edge of my seat waiting for more, and wiggling heatedly in it as soon as I get it open to read. I'm trying to talk my hubbie into reading it too.

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  • From ANON - Mari on February 21, 2011
    Amazing story and fun to watch it progress. I eagerly await finding out why she isnt in touch with her wolf and watching her and her mates get time post changing to bond. Poor Neville he always seems to have a rough time of it.
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  • From Atalanta24 on February 21, 2011
    i cant wait for the next update lol
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  • From StarrCrystal on February 21, 2011
    I swear that everytime I see that you updated, I feel tears in my
    eyes. I just REALLY love this story. I just never seen a story like
    this before. Please keep up the good work and I must tell you that
    you have a very loyal reader on ypur hands now. No matter how
    long it takes you to update, I will always be on the look out and
    never stop reading
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  • From circe266 on February 20, 2011
    Fascinating chapter! I love how you wrote the different perspectives, although I confess I was a little confused by who each wolf was based on fur color. I really hope that sweet Yorik comes next (pun intended), not the old geezer.

    And why is Hermione not 'one with her wolf'? Is it really something to worry about, like the men think, or is it because she is a pup and not a regular sub?

    I think you need to post your next chapter sooner than usual to make up for last week's longer wait. ;-)
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  • From dragongirl on February 20, 2011
    Interesting and hot!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - colao on February 20, 2011
    Once again, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
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  • From StillHorny on February 20, 2011
    I just knew it would be Fenrir first. But I thought Yorik would be second instead of Severus. But Hermoine's wolf knows who is the stronger beta.

    What is she going to do now? Why isn't her wolf taking control?

    Who all took Neville? Was it Severus only?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2011
    oh i feel so bad for fenrir he wants to protect hermione so badly but he can't fully protect her from his wolf. This chapter is great, i can't wait to see what will happen during the rest of the changing :)
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  • From leValkyrie on February 20, 2011
    Wow I didn't even know you had updated last week. So it was kind of like I got two new chapters in one update today! I was intrigued about what the guys had did before the changing. I kno Hermione was supposed to stay calm so that the changing would be easier, but it was clear that the guys weren't helping any by hiding things from her! The changing was interesting! I'm a little confused as to why Hermione isn't in tandem with her wolf, but I'm sure if I'm patient, my questions will be answered. I would have liked to hear more about what happened with Neville. Please say you'll fill us in! I was really worried about him during the changing. Poor independent Hermione tried to run, didn't she know that was going to be a bad idea. I think she needs to get her head together and realize that she's going to have to make a decision or else the wolves will fight. Great update!!!!
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  • From Ilovetwilight18 on February 16, 2011
    Awesome story, I didn't want to run out of chapters to read.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on February 13, 2011
    :-( So after reading your notes I don't want to read this chapter. But my need to read your amazing story I did. I just want the next one, I can't wait!! I am so EXCITED the day has come!!!!! I love your story, that is why I couldn't wait to read this chapter even if I known that they wouldn't change into the next one, I LOVE YOUR WORK.keep it coming, the best!!
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  • From StillHorny on February 13, 2011
    I am afraid to ask what the alpha and two betas did? But I am glad that Hermoine has chosen Ages as one of her mates two. That makes two alphas and two betas; this can only strengthen the clan. But also make Hermoine a VERY happy and satisfied sub *shiver at the thought*!!!!

    I can not wait for the graphic details of the change and who will take her fist, second, third, and (now) fourth. Severus gets to take part in both Hermoine's and Neville's claiming.

    I am all hot and wet, just thinking about it. BETAS, please beta and post soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Idril_Luinwe on February 13, 2011
    LOVE IT! I can't wait for the next chapter in this story! Please post soon!
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