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By : grugster
  • From circe266 on February 07, 2011
    Thanks for the warning! I really liked reading the description of what Hermione has ahead of her in her first changing. Surely Fenrir will be her first, since he is her soulmate?

    As for the lemon . . . *cough cough*
    (Please don't take it personally -- it is not your writing skill, I just can't see past the image of an elderly authority figure 'taking advantage' of a young (teenage?) girl.)

    I can't wait for your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - thestralhorse on February 06, 2011
    This chapter is awesome, Ages is soooo dominant and Hermione is so cute!!! thank you for updating you made my day =)
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  • From StillHorny on February 06, 2011
    Oh, I loved this chapter!!! Hermoine may now have a fouth mate...maybe *wink, smirk* with the HEAD ALPHA. That would mean two alphas and two betas as her mates. Ages is right, the clan will become very strong with Hermoine as a pup.

    I CANNOT wait until the first changing now that Ages has discribed it!!!

    Please post soon, with lots of GRAPHIC details. I am curious as to who will mate Hermoine first, second, third, and maybe fourth. Also, I wonder if Neville will have to fight the female werewolves off with a stick?!?!?!?!
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  • From ANON - Emily on February 06, 2011
    HEY! I have been reading this story from the beginning. I just felt the need to say that I LOVE IT!!! It soooo makes my day when I see your story posted. I know how hard it can be to do anything else but want to go to sleep after two jobs (I have two part-time and am a full time student with 18 hours). Just had a quick question that popped into my mind. Are you ending after the changing? I realllyyy hope not :) I just wanted to send a shout out that I love love love your story and hope that you continue it :) Can't wait to see the next chapter!!!

    A faithful reader :)

    Emily
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  • From dragongirl on February 06, 2011
    That was sexy, hot and wonderful ........... Ty for your responses!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on February 03, 2011
    Sooo good! I loved it, I can't wait for the nexy chapter, and WHEN THEY BECOME WOLVES, full moon here they come I cant WAIT!!! Keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - Caitlin on February 03, 2011
    Your story is great!! Please keep it coming :)
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  • From circe266 on February 03, 2011
    Interesting to read how Hermione satisfies her pack (except Amaris -- I hope for Amaris' sake that she gets some action with a sexy sub like Draco). What was going on in Hermione's head?

    I LOVE your story, and look forward so much to every chapter you post, but I find myself hoping that the next chapter doesn't have Hermione having sex with Ages. There is something about the thought of a very young Hermione having sex with an elderly man who reminds her of Dumbledore which is just . . . ugh. I'm up for reading about Hermione paired with just about any other dominant you like, though. ;D
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  • From ANON - theladykt on February 03, 2011
    hmmm wonder what was up with her
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  • From purpleann on February 03, 2011
    Aii!!! Cliffhanger! It was nice to see Morgan and Hermione get some quality time together. :) Will she ever be with Amaris that way? Pleeeeease post the next chapter soon, I can't wait to see what Ages has to say to her!
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  • From StarrCrystal on February 02, 2011
    NO!!!! I so cant wait for the next chapter!!!!! Im so excited & I know that
    Im going to love it like I love the rest of the story. This story is awsome!
    Please keep up the good work!
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  • From StarrCrystal on February 02, 2011
    Hey, I was just wondering if it would be possible that we could see
    some sexual interactions between Hermione and Neville. Just to put
    a little spin on an already perfect story. I will totally understand if
    you dont use it. Just a suggestion :-)
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  • From MalfoysBitch on February 02, 2011
    Yeay, Hermione and Fenrir! Love it when the 'family' are about,love the way fenrir thinks about hermione!
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  • From dragongirl on February 02, 2011
    Morgan bring the sweetness in the story.. Please keep them coming......... Do you have an specific day when you update?
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  • From ANON - colao on February 02, 2011
    I'm intrigued by upcoming conversation between Ages and Hermione; I like the dynamics of the pack interactions, too.
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