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Reviews for Just Submit 2

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  • From ANON - theladykt on January 21, 2011
    yumminess. cant wait for more
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  • From circe266 on January 21, 2011
    Oh, I'm definitely NOT losing interest -- I love this story so much. I do have to admit that I much prefer the Hermione-chapters to the Neville-chapters, as I am not a big slash fan. Although I think that I would enjoy reading about Fenrir dominating Yorik, and even Fenrir dominating Severus. Preferably with Hermione watching and participating.

    Can't wait to read your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - thestralhorse on January 20, 2011
    I absolutely still love this story it is fantastic and the interaction between fenrir, yoric and nevile is awesome
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  • From StillHorny on January 20, 2011
    I was so curious to find out what was in the bowel...ice cubes; PRICELESS!!!!!

    As an avid fan, I will post a review everytime for you. I want you to keep the story going. I LOVE this story as well as the first "Just Submit".

    Your interplay between the characters is very satisfying.

    MORE...PLEASE!!!
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  • From StarrCrystal on January 20, 2011
    Oh my goodness. I was so close to tears when I saw the update. Actually, I had to wipe a few stary tears away. I really love this story.... I hope this doesnt make my a pervert or anything. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Ella on January 20, 2011
    I ABSOLUTELY LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! I got involved with Just Submit a week ago and read through it so fast because it was so good. I was ecstatic to find a sequel!!! Do you think you'll be doing any FenrirxYorik in the future? It'd be an epic couple to do it with.
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  • From ANON - Xoburntofferings on January 20, 2011
    YAY!! Just what I wanted to read on a snowy day. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - bethany on January 20, 2011
    Loved it! Always realy look forward to the next chapters coming out if you ever need a beta give me a bell. Have been reading this story since the very first chapter of Just Submit was published love the fact that you update so often.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on January 20, 2011
    ok so I don't want to feel like everytime I review I say the same thing but your story is AMAZINGGGG! This chapter as sooo hot! I loved it! You have no idea how excited I am to read your story. I just get this feeling and this feeling is like go check for a up date and there it is!! I think that if you would stop writting this story I would just die, :-( lol, no but I do love your story. And I just want to put this out there, I can't wait for this Fenrir and Yorik scene ok! lol. Keep.up.this.good.work.
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  • From MalfoysBitch on January 20, 2011
    With the amount of hits,i dont think people are getting fed up! Just lazy with their reviews! Glad to see nevil is finally embracing his inner wolf! Brilliant! Cant wait to see hermione back with fenir's pack! Loving the plot!
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  • From dragongirl on January 20, 2011
    Sexy, hot and wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on January 13, 2011
    NOOOOOOO, lol I didnt even notice I was at the end of the chapter into the last two lines. For the record I love Neville, lol. I love how I just came to just check if there is a update and there one is for me. I love you. I am jumping up and down, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'll be looking,lol.
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  • From ANON - Caitlin on January 13, 2011
    I've fallen in love with this story :) Thanks for it!!! I hate this cliff hanger though :P
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  • From circe266 on January 13, 2011
    I love the all the different pairings/vignettes in this chapter. I am somewhat surprised that Severus is the first one to talk of his love for Hermione; I would have expected the secret softie Yorik to be the first one to admit his love for his 'pup'.

    Side note: I hope that Yorik's thought about wanting Fenrir to dominate him again is foreshadowing for an upcoming chapter, hopefully with Hermione included too. Oooh, an interlude with Hermione and all three of her mates at once would be awesome! *looks hopefully at author*

    I can't wait for your next chapter, although I am hoping that an encounter between young Hermione and the elderly Ages isn't too icky.

    Thanks for the faster than usual update!
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  • From purpleann on January 12, 2011
    I just love what you're doing with this story! I love how you explain the subs' natural reactions to the dominants and their desire to please them. Seeing Neville with Fenrir and Yorik was a great time, and the scene with Ages and Draco was super cute. :) I can't wait to read what happens next!
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