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Reviews for Just Submit 2

By : grugster
  • From ANON - xoburntofferings on January 12, 2011
    Yay! Just what I needed on a nice snowy day. I can't to see how this story unfolds.
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  • From dragongirl on January 12, 2011
    Thank you for making Draco OK! Keep them coming.........
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  • From ANON - Jessica on January 10, 2011
    Great chapter again! Look forward to the next chapter, I love the mix that you had in the chapter. a little bit of everything. and I cant wait into they turn into werewolves. Love your work Keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - scarlet quill on January 09, 2011
    Hey there! Awesome chapter had me a little worried about poor Draco. But definately reassuring to see all the dominants come together to help them. Eager to see what you will pull out next!
    In regards to you wanting someone to pre-read your chapters before publishing to check the flow and narratives, i would be very happy to help! You have me completely hooked and a few hopes of what will happen next! Send me an email I'm totally up for helping and dont worry I wont try to steal your position for beta! LOL
    Speak soon
    Scarlet Quill UK
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  • From leValkyrie on January 09, 2011
    I think this story is just sooo great! I anxiously await each of your updates. Poor Draco, he's in so much pain. Yay Hermione because even though she's a sub she's a powerful sub. I wouldn't expect anything less from her. Finally poor Neville, it's obvious that the poor child is about to lose his mind. I really do hope he makes it through his changing though. And there is something that is attracting me to Calan. He's a dominant but his actions scream submissive in so many ways. I like him. Hopefully he can repair his relationship with Draco and make up for his bad performance.
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  • From ANON - theladykt on January 09, 2011
    poor draco. hope he'll be ok. neville too
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  • From ANON - sparky on January 09, 2011
    the only thing that i think might be a little off is that you had the doms trying to teach neville and hermione that they need to tell the doms what they need or want such as neville and igor with neville telling him no dry entery
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  • From StillHorny on January 09, 2011
    Do not fear, your fans are devoted to you because you are an excellent writer!!!

    I was so hot from the threesome with Hermoine and her alpha and beta. It was well worth the wait.

    Neville is still very afraid and I hope that he becomes more confident. And I trust that Draco will be his impish self again soon.
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  • From circe266 on January 08, 2011
    This is my favorite chapter so far because of the Hermione/Fenrir/Yorik action. So very well done, from Yorik's initial disappointed comment about at least getting to hold her while Fenrir had his fun, to lucky Hermione sandwiched between the two hot werewolves, to the surprisingly hot dom/sub action between Fenrir & Yorik. More of this, please!

    I just hope that Draco is OK, and that Calan doesn't leave the pack.
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  • From cynaga on January 08, 2011
    a guilty pleasure...
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  • From ANON - xoburntofferings on January 08, 2011
    Yay! I can't wait for the next chapter. Sooo excited.
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  • From dragongirl on January 08, 2011
    If you need someone for reading your chapters prior to the updates, my email is ishtarluz2012@gmail. As for this chapter ........... TY TY TY my poor Draco is on the save side. As for Yorik............ if my imagination is correct ....... What a beautiful specimen of a man............. LOL
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  • From redeyedemon on January 08, 2011
    Ah! I'm so sorry I didn't review last chapter. I read it, and I was really traumatized that Draco was injured, and then life decided to take a turn for the worse. And, while it hasn't exactly improved, I saw an update, and I had to read it, becuase I felt really bad that I didn't review.

    Draco's okay! Which is really, really important, because he's kinda, sorta my favorite... The submissive wolf thing just makes him all the more appealing.

    Anyways, I enjoyed, as always, even if I nearly cried for Draco. I can't wait for more.

    Until next time,
    Alena
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  • From ANON - Mira on January 08, 2011
    Great job so far, though the segue from the gentle healing in chapter 5 to the hardcore and (intentionally) somewhat clumsy s&m in chapter 6 was a bit surprising. Other than that - I loved the whole scene in the Lounge. Keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on January 06, 2011
    First let me tell you I have been reading stories on this site for about a year and a half okay,and this is the first review I have made. I LOVE THIS STORY, I MEAN LOOOOVVVVVEEEEE IT!!! By me reviewing this means that this story is soooo good! The last few weeks I just wanted to read a Fenrir story cause I want to see the submit part. About a week ago, By some way I came to your story and I read the fisrt one and I read this one. But today I was just on and I saw this at the top and I said lets see if there at a update, and there was. AND I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. I was a little bit unsure at the beginging, not into the hole torture thing but you so worked it. I love how you have the submitting but also I love the comfort in it as well. I can't wait for the next chapter and this is one story that I WILL be checking back for. Fenrir caring for Draco I loved it. I know that I keep going on but great story!!!
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