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Reviews for Just Submit 2

By : grugster
  • From StillHorny on January 06, 2011
    As always, your prose is pleaserable to read (even though I don't normally like slash). Yours however, always seems more erotic with the D/s aspect. Very well written.

    What is wrong with Draco's balls? *I can't believe that I just wrote that ;0*

    Thank you for promising that Yorik will get his chance to 'pleasure' Hermione. I can't wait!!!!
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  • From ANON - scarlet quill on January 05, 2011
    Hey totally addicted to your stories! It sounds as if your problem with having your unpublished chapters would be easily solved by a beta reader. I would be happy to read through them for you. Correct spelling punctuation etc...and send them back to you. I do a few more authors on here, the bonus for me, I get to read early chaps :D my beta address is
    scarlet.bandit.girl@googlemail.com
    Feel free to email any time! Looking forward to your next installment!!!
    Scarlet Quill xoxo
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  • From ANON - thestralhorse on January 05, 2011
    I am absolutly in love with this story!!!!! i read Just Submit a while ago and have just found the sequel and fell in love with the story again, thank you so much for posting it =)
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  • From cynaga on January 05, 2011
    incredibly hot!
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  • From MalfoysBitch on January 05, 2011
    What an update, I had missed Fenrir! Update soon!
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  • From circe266 on January 04, 2011
    Poor Draco! To be honest, I found the action in this chapter to be a bit more disturbing than hot, though the quality of the descriptions and the writing overall is good, as always.

    As a Yorik fan, I am on the edge of my seat in eagerness for the next chapter. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - colao on January 04, 2011
    ...wow...
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  • From ANON - xoburntofferings on January 04, 2011
    YAY!! I was so happy to see a new chapter. Great Job!
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  • From ANON - april on January 04, 2011
    another good chapter.
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  • From ANON - dark_of_night on January 04, 2011
    I love your story and how it is progressing. If you want a beta or someone just to read the chapters and let you know how everything is flowing, I'd love to do it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From dragongirl on January 04, 2011
    My poor Drake......... *snif* Please let him be ok...........
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  • From on January 04, 2011
    hi there
    just wanted to tell you that you are doing a great job with this story. sorry new with this site and not really used to write reviews but i just tought that with your story it was necessary to do it.
    I cannot wait for your next update.
    merry christmas and happy be-lated new year
    clau
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  • From ANON - Dawn on January 03, 2011
    Thanks for the last few chapters! It was interesting to see the others POV. I like it! This is definately my favorite story :)
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  • From purpleann on January 02, 2011
    I LOVED the bit with Calan & Yorik, that was super hot. More of Calan, please. :) Also, anytime the three subs have playtime is adorable and fun, so I really liked that scene too. BUT I am really starting to miss Fenrir!!! When does Hermione get to have alone time with him again? (or with him and Yorik?) Also, will Hermione ever be with the other dominants in her pack? Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Beth on January 01, 2011
    I am totally addicted to ur story I have now read the first and what is up of the second part in one night I did not want to put it done. Keep it up can't wait for the next chapter.
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