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Reviews for Just Submit 2

By : grugster
  • From ANON - quaff on September 09, 2012
    This is another great chapter. I like seeing the breaks between Lance and Hermione's meetings. Would love to see sessions between Fenrir and Severus. Thank you for writing this story.
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  • From ANON - Mark's Pet on September 09, 2012
    I LOVE this story. And I will wait patiently for each chapter.

    The story line is great and the smut if even better.

    Please do not let a few get you down. You have devoted fans for this story and for your style of writting. Not matter how long in between.

    More...please!
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  • From Kahlira on September 05, 2012
    I just finished reading both Just Submit and Just Submit 2. I thought that they were wonderfully thought out and well written. I very much like a closer look at the werewolf clans and how they are run. Your ideas are very well thought out. I hope you continue writing this story. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - rook on August 27, 2012
    I'm glad to see an update. Keep em coming please.
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  • From ANON - Galina on August 12, 2012
    I already realized that I will never get answers to my questions, but why is Hermione so afraid around dominants when it comes to sex? As if any of them would dare to hurt her... or as if she isn't the bitch to get all 'oh god' and 'oh Merlin' if they touch her -.- She is really a pathetic whimp. I was rereading some chapters, and it's really annoying how Hermione's every second sentence is 'I can't'. And Draco, why does he think he is so much better than Tara?
    And of course Tara: why do you write about her as if she is the bitch to hurt and then throw away? Why is she a bitch while it's so much nice and natural if the others are acting like her? After you wrote that scene where she is saying that she doesn't enjoy it their treatmen became abuse in my eyes. It doesn't matter that she feels good for satisfiing them it's just pure instinct. She is a human being, and you as the author should know it best... Draco and Hermione both would deserve the same treatment.
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  • From ANON - Shirlisa on August 10, 2012
    I was wondering when we will see something bad happen to Neville,his and Severus' relationship seems to be put at hold. And I'm sad that Draco(whose a sub) and Hermione(a pup) both get dangerous things happen to them and Neville seems to have been thrown to the side, I miss his cute delicious self...can't wait to read more you have me hooked once more and I hope you continue this amazing tale and never let any of your readers go.
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  • From ANON - Pauliina on August 09, 2012
    I have to say this is still the only unfinished fic I'm coming back time and time agen. And I can't wait for the next chapter. You are doing a grate job. keep it up and coming, so will I!! ;D
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  • From Citten on August 07, 2012
    YEAH!!! a new chapter! and i am very glad that you are back and well! i have so missed not reading the stroy! i cant wait to see what else is going to happen with the other mates and what lance is going to tell them. i so do hope that you will be posting the next chapter soon! i so LOVE THIS STORY! so i dont care how long it takes or what anyone-and i mean anyone--has to say that you will continue to write!!! :)
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  • From MalfoysBitch on August 02, 2012
    you are definately worth thw wait!! fabtadtic chapter!! cant wait to hear about sev and fenrir with lance!!
    cant wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2012
    Hermione should be slapped every f*cking time she is using 'Ehm...'
    I'm wating so much for the moment when Tara will just say them to fuck off (even if that won't happen ever). Poor girl... is it really that hard for them to address her by her name? Not just 'girl' or even worse, 'bitch'

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  • From ANON - colao on August 01, 2012
    so excited for another chapter!
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  • From ANON - mnfm on August 01, 2012
    Great chapter! I'm glad you're back!
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  • From ANON - empress11690 on July 25, 2012
    AWEsOME!!! So different from what I have read of this pairing and I truely enjoy this very much.
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  • From ANON - thestralhorse on July 23, 2012
    Hi, I just noticed on your author page that you are having a problem getting your chapters back from your beta, I don't know if I would be a very good beta but I would be more than willing to try if you are looking for someone. I really love your story and have missed the updates over the last few months (I have just finished rereading both parts of the story lol ) Thanks for writing the story it is really fantastic! Just Submit has been my favorite fanfiction since I started reading it!!
    If you are looking for another beta my email is vicky.randall@comcast.net
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  • From ANON - SB on July 18, 2012
    Please don't abandon this story!!! I am so anxious to see what will happen next!
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