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Reviews for Death\'s Design, Fate\'s Plan

By : Illiandyandra
  • From sleepyheadless on February 01, 2011
    Another great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2011
    "Your story has been hidden. Please check the email box associated with your AFF account for more information. If you no longer have access to this account, please contact tos_team@adultfanfiction.net for more information."
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  • From caboose5083 on January 22, 2011
    Great plot so far,I hope to read more. I hope life grants you the time to update.
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  • From tinkerbell1989 on January 16, 2011
    I love this story! It's been so long since I have read a Harry/Hermione story. =) Please update soon
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  • From Kayrox133 on January 16, 2011
    Love the story and how everything is falling apart for Dumbledore. More please
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  • From DarkXavier on January 06, 2011
    I must say...this was one hell of a chapter. I absolutely LOVED the dream sequence. I found it ridiculously hot. Even though Hermoine and Ginny didn't do anything but stand there, the thought of them being thoroughly analyzed by the Harrys and Snape was such a great idea! Keep up the good work and I hope to read more from this soon!
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  • From sleepyheadless on December 28, 2010
    Another great chapter!
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  • From bsmith2114 on December 19, 2010
    Fantastic! Wonderfull! Excellent! Are just some of the words that describe this story. Taking down Dumbledore is always good reading, never get tired of a dark lord hiding as the leader of the light getting his comupins. Full marks!!!!!!
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  • From azphxbrd on December 18, 2010
    I liked that chapter.It was great that Sirius's freedom has messed up Albus's current plans causing him to do damage control.I truly enjoyed reading about Hermione's deamscape brought to them by Fate.Keep up the good work.
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  • From DrStranger on December 18, 2010
    So, I've only read the first two chapters so far, but they've been enough to get me to register just so I can provide feedback on this story.

    It's great!

    Okay, that's a little thin, but it really is. It does start off in a manner that gives a that could have caused the story to fall apart as just plain silly, but it then refuses to do that. I'm very much looking forward to how this story progresses.

    I did feel that Ron's turn around was a little abrupt though. It might feel more natural if his epiphany came a little slower.

    A couple of edit issues in Chapter two:


    "That was NOT going to happe." - needs an 'n' for happen
    Several Subject Bs don
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  • From newtothis on December 18, 2010
    ok story, a little hard on ron, that rat was as inportant to him as hermoine cat was to her, and she acted like it was know big deal, and and trying to learn thinks form hermoine is hard becouse she treat you bad, how many times does she call ron a stupid git, but that ok, only when he fight back is there a problem.

    kind of like the going back in time to save everybody.
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  • From newtothis on December 12, 2010
    inresting story, ron not neally as bad as you make him, but i like how you trying to change him.
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  • From sleepyheadless on December 07, 2010
    Another great chapter, I'm looking forward to your next update.
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  • From azphxbrd on December 04, 2010
    Good chapter,
    What away to pick your future girl along with comparing them with thier mothers.It is good that Peter is captured and going to be punished for his crimes against the Potter family.Keep the good work awaiting next update.
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  • From snichol98 on December 04, 2010
    Great start and an interesting twist--cant wait to read the next chapter--am available as a prof reader if you want one..
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