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Reviews for Harry's Punishment

By : DravanaMyst
  • From ANON - Ace on January 26, 2016
    Draco disillusion yourself while you watch Harrys spanking . * after spanking* Harry , send Draco in to me. WTF, but Draco was disillusioned?! How? Also 2 hours of spanking...youch...I mean didnt the prof get tired? and Harry keel over in pain? I mean at an average of one spank every 5sec thats over 1400 spanks in 2 hours...
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  • From ANON - AvidReader on November 08, 2015
    I crave to one day see this updated
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  • From Marie on March 24, 2014
    I loved this story. Hope u continue with it.
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  • From ANON - Wraith on June 14, 2012
    Update?
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  • From ANON - Kitten on September 30, 2011
    How is there enough water in the world? Seriously, anyone wetting themselves this much would be extremely dehydrated. The idea is not a bad one, and hits a few people's kinks, but you can't write this much -just- about the kink. Harry wets himself, gets punished, wets himself, gets punished... Ad nauseum. Mix it up a little,, introduce some new punishments, I don't know, how about -show- Harry's reaction!!! From what you've written, he doesn't seem to care at all what is happening to him. Part of the sexual background of this kink is humiliation, so why isn't he humiliated? If you want to write an erotic story based on a humiliation kink, it is important to show the emotional effects of the punishment.

    Anyway, I've got nothing more to add. I'd go read some decent erotic fic if I were you, just to see how good it -can- be.
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  • From ANON - ace1 on January 27, 2011
    Wow that was really quite bad. and not in a good way. It was completly unrealistic in ...well..everything. Characters, actions, results from actions. It was not funny and you obviously need to practise ALOT more.Why would you even post that i wonder?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2011
    "Your story has been hidden. Please check the email box associated with your AFF account for more information. If you no longer have access to this account, please contact tos_team@adultfanfiction.net for more information."
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  • From ANON - Wraith on January 18, 2011
    Like it update?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2010
    I like the idea of this story. The thought of harry getting punished and wetting himself then diapered is kind of funny. I hope you update. I'ed like to see where it goes.
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  • From Hambares on December 03, 2010
    I don't think I have ever read anything so odd! It was meant to be funny, yes?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2010
    I'm all for reading about odd kinks, but that has got to be the most bizarre, ill put-together piece of prose I've ever read. This was the most strangely worded and unbeleivably grammar-lacking story ever composed. Every character was so OOC that it wouldn't have mattered at all if the names were changed and it was posted under a different genre or even as an original-- nobody would know the difference. Nice try, but seriously... Was this a parody or something?
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  • From ANON - I_Will_Change_the_World on December 03, 2010
    Perhaps, you should stick to role playing or writing plays...
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  • From ANON - Mia on December 03, 2010
    Worst storytelling I have ever read. And that is saying a lot.

    ~Mia
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  • From Stevo1711 on December 03, 2010
    I am Hooked....and anyone who is hooked on a good story...well needless to say I want more. This is brilliant and I can't wait for more and please keep it going please
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  • From Arieru on December 03, 2010
    I like I so far. please dont abandon this one. ^^
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