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Reviews for The Fine Line

By : nekluvshp
  • From Zoha-Lixue on April 04, 2018

    Oh this was just amazing!


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  • From ANON - Guess who on August 20, 2016

    HAHAHAHAHAH I CAN IMAGINE HOW HARRY LOOKED THERE XD

    First time, I found this in FFnet and found the sex scenes deleted. Goddamnit, this was good!


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  • From redcherry3 on April 18, 2016
    this was epic... you should do a squeal with harry and draco...or one with severus and sirius pregnant.
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  • From Severus1snape on April 06, 2015
    omg omg omg I LOVE THIS!!!
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on November 24, 2011
    I totally love this story line. Locking Snape and Black in together and letting the story come from that scene. Brilliant! I also liked the points that made them more caring towards each other, Snape 'blushing' so adorable!
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on May 12, 2011
    I laughed my ass off with this story. Even the sex scene was funny. You promised awhile ago that you would write a sequel to this. Where is it?
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  • From jujukitty on January 27, 2011
    lol okay, that was freaking hilarious! poor traumatized harry. and the snarking between siri and sev was great, just an awesome job with their personalities. keep up the great work :D
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  • From Veralidaine on December 25, 2010
    PLEASE PLEASE can you write a chapter where Harry has loud sex with Draco Malfoy in the next room just to annoy Sirius and Severus? You could have them both freak out; Sirius because Harry is fucking Draco and Severus, because Draco is fucking Harry. It would be so funny to see them get a taste of their own medicine and maybe decide to be quieter when they're having sex
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  • From hellangelhellina on December 07, 2010
    that was great. it would be awsome iff harry really did leat them ceatch him with draco.
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  • From on December 06, 2010
    B-E-A-utiful tyvm i needed a laugh after reading your other one (truly content)


    all my love The Maiden Lyra
    maiden6of6the6dark@yahoo.com
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