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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Death Eater\'s Curse

By : thehalfbloodprincess
  • From HowLongIsForever on May 17, 2011
    I really like your writing. It's well written and everything is spelled right, which is a relief. Your imagery is detailed and pretty without sounding forced. Your characterisation is excellent. I really feel like I can get into the head of your Harry, who's happy but maybe a little unsatisfied, and fairly self-confident but shy at times, and what I like most of all is that your Harry is really the same one that J.K. Rowling wrote, which is unusual in fanfiction. Usually in stories where Harry and Malfoy declare a truce right at the beginning, it's out of character and grating, but you did it well. Instead of two rivals who suddenly decide to put everything aside and be friends for no reason, I see two boys who are growing out of their school rivalry and growing up and who are strong enough to attempt a fresh start because they've both seen too much to hold onto their hate for each other. Many writers try to achieve that. Most fail. Basically what I'm saying is your story (at least so far) holds nothing particularly new, but it takes the old and does it better. Which is really all one can ask for from a fanfiction. I hope you continue to write. AFF needs more stories from authors like you.
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  • From TCardan on December 07, 2010
    It's going very well:) Please continue. I like this kinder Draco.
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  • From SilentDreamer on December 06, 2010
    Wonderful start, truly caught my attention, will be waiting for more very soon.
    Kudos ;p
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