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Reviews for Good Intentions and the Best Deceptions

By : CatieBrie
  • From Danyealle on January 05, 2011

    Please correct your disclaimer


    It does not contain one of the two required elements. Namely, the part in which you disclaim the fandom itself by NAME, not just the characters. It can be worded however you, the author, likes, provided that it is clear you are disclaiming the specificfandom, which thus INCLUDES characters, settings, and etc.


    You must disclaim the actual fandom, not the owner(s) of the fandom, or characters in the fandom. When it is a crossover fiction, all fandoms involved IN the crossover must be disclaimed as well.


    Failure to correct the disclaimer will cause your story to be hidden from public view after a week from the date of this warning, butnot deleted; you can still correct your disclaimer, which will then be unhidden again as soon as possible. Continued failure to correct the disclaimer will cause the hidden story to be deleted after 30 days of being hidden. Re-uploads of hidden stories are deleted immediately, no warning given.


    Below is a link to the Terms of Service in its entirety

    http://www.adultfanfiction.net/tos.php


    In addition, the next link listed is to the FAQ regarding disclaimers.

    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=3560

    You can also review our news post on the topic for a complete explaination, found here:
    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php/topic/17420-site-news-11-6-10/
    Please also take a few minutes to read the content guidelines.

    http://www.adultfanfiction.net/guidelines.php

    Please remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.




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  • From butterflies1974 on December 24, 2010
    Interesting story and I can't wait to read more. This story has all the makings of one of the best Draco and Harry one out in Fanfiction. I really can't wait to find out more about the both of them and what will happen next.
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  • From queenmalice on December 22, 2010
    I'm really not sure since you haven't had naked Draco in a sex scene yet, but I really don't think you meant castrate in the first chapter. Unless Draco cut off his own penis, he did not castrate himself. you need a different word.

    Otherwise, great story, I'm really looking forward to seeing where it goes.

    Dar
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  • From Dadella on December 21, 2010
    And you were worried about being able to competently create a good slash scene! /melikey


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  • From Tesgura on December 21, 2010
    Well shit, he realized he didn't love his wife and just got drunk and got fucked. I see many things going wrong for both of them, but I can't wait to read about them.
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