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Reviews for Precious Mudblood

By : magentasouth

From BelvaRoze on February 08, 2013
I am in love with this story I cant wait to find out what happens to make her wake up with draco. I really hope that Tom/Voldy is still alive and comes for her! You are a fantastic writer please update soon.
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From ANON - Jade on January 08, 2013
An amazing story I do hope you will update again soon. I have never read a more engaging fanfiction before. I have been reading it for four days straight untill the straighn on my eyes made me go to bed. It really is amazing and I can't wait to find out what happens in the end. This story has become an addiction, lol. I love it!!
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From ANON - alice on December 28, 2012
Ok, so, this is my favorite story I have ever read and I just read it all in a week and now there's no more! Why you gotta leave me hangin? I'm dying! Tom is dead?! You totally broke my heart with that one, lady :( I hope you have some crazy plot twist planned to bring him back. Plus I'm kinda confused with the whole two timelines thing happening at once. Anyways, just wanted to send a review in the hopes that you might see it and write another chapter. Now I'm off to read your other stories! Haha. Have a lovely day :) Oh and happy almost new years!
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From ANON - mzp on December 16, 2012
Just a little message to say that I love your story (I've just finished to read it for the second time). It is really original, and the whole idea behind the conduit thing is brilliant. I mean, it makes a perfect alibi for some mary sue-ish traits of Hermione (like being extremely powerful as well as desired by all the wizards around) and it is perfectly logical with the development of characters.
I love the way you twisted the vision of the world, with a dark Harry and a lovable bunch of Death Eaters + Voldemort, without making Voldemort or his followers out of characters. No, they are still mad, sadistic and dark. And I love it!
And with the inner nature of a conduit you justified in a perfectly logical way the behaviour of Hermione, who sometimes appears so meek and subdued towards Voldemort and Severus, especially. And then, again, I love the irony of everyone saying that she is theirs, but she actually realizing that they are hers.
And Rodolphus. You really created a perfect amazing fascinating dangerous character here. Please give us more Rodolphus :)
Now, for the latest developments: Draco is obviously playing at something. I cannot wait to know exactly what is the *real* situation in the future. And Draco is really one of the smartest out there. You created another perfected Slytherin here, probably the most Slytherin of all. Love it!
I read in the forum that you have RL issues, now, and cannot really write more. Don't worry: you already gave us a great story, even if you would leave it as it is. I mean: I'd be really really really happy to read more of it. But I'm already grateful for such a beautiful story, with a perfectly orchestrated character development and plotline. I was really dumbfounded when I read that this is your first fanfic.

That said, I couldn't help but leave you a review, hoping that it will trigger another update ;)

Thank you for what you wrote so far, you gave me countless hours of fun (and when I most needed an escape from reality!).

MZP
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From ANON - Fan Reader on December 15, 2012
Hey! It's me again! =D
I hope all is well on your side of the world! This is an early wish for a happy Christmas/Hanukkah/Holidays! I hope you have a great time!
But most of all, I hope you get enough free time away from your job to write a new chapter for this fic. =3 Hehehe...
I understand if you can't though, or if you'd rather spend the time doing other things (I know I would)! And it still won't stop me from regularly checking up on this fic. 'cuz I'm addicted!
Toodles!

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From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2012
Just read this story for a second time :) please, please, please update again soon!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - kitty on December 04, 2012
pleaseeee.... pleasee.... i beg you to update this story..... please, i beg you @magentasouth... please answer this review too
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From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2012
I bet you are super busy. But if you could find the time I would really love for this story to continue. There are so many things up in the air! You spoiled us when you first posted it, by posting nearly every day. Now im hooked.
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From ANON - elr on November 10, 2012
please please pleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease update
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From ANON - Emily on November 09, 2012
I love this story so far and love how consistent you are with your characters for each of your other stories as well. Can't wait for the next chapter here and for the other stories updates as well. :) define toy sitting at the edge of my chair and biting my nails with impatience lol :P
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From ANON - mark's pet on November 03, 2012
Dearest Magentasouth,

I wanted to let you know that I was so enthralled with this story, that I have devoured it over the last few weeks. To the exclusion of all the other stories that I am currently reading!!!

The story is an awesome, riveting, and well written story; and of course, the SEX!! Your dynamics with the Voldemort/Hermione relationship in this story and Captive Audience is amazing. I love that you keep Voldemort as an essentially
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From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2012
What a great story. I am soo curious about what happens next in both timelines. I really miss Voldy, Severus and Rodolphus and am hoping that somehow she ends up with them again. They cant really be dead.. Right? I'm looking forward to learning how she woke up in the present not remembering that she resurrected Lucius or anything about that night...I get soo frustrated every time these dark wizards block her use of her magic... I am also wondering just how many wizards are going to be at her mercy by the end of this story... You write the characters very well and considering how many characters are in this story , that is no small accomplishment. Your characters have defining personalities and depth and they are believable and consistent.. Please post another chapter soon!!!!
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From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2012
I'm starting to really like this Ducat Uriel character. He seems incredibly interesting. The way you wrote his story was compelling, and very vivid. It was a nice change from Hermione's POV. I can't wait to see how you're going to connect everything in the past to everything in the future, and how Dumbles vs Grindilocks is going to go down. Awesome!
And fiou! This story took me soooo long to read, I wasted 2 days reading this instead of studying for my looming midterm. But I don't regret it.
PS: I noticed that Hermione kept saying that only Tom has ever had her in the rear... is she lying? or has she (or maybe you?) forgotten her menage a trois with Rudolphus and Lucius? ...or did I misunderstand that scene altogether?
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From ANON - shannon on September 06, 2012
Tried to submit a review but not sure if it went through so I apologize if this is a repeat. Just finished reading the story again and it is still my favorite fanfiction. The characters, the plot, the mystery, just all of it is great. Reading it again I tried to look out for clues that might help me figure out whats going on in the later chapters but alas I'm still at a loss. I hope you will update again soon as I am dyingggg to read more. I will try to wait patiently until the next chapters or up :).
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From ANON - Lyra Aphrodite Moon on August 26, 2012
Utterly confused... Well, no, not entirely. I've spent the past 3 days addicted and I mean ADDICTED to reading this story, so please don't take this as a flame but a few things -- it's doesn't need to have that much gore or sex. Yes, I know this is AFF, but it doesn't seem like a PWP type of story. There is an actual STORY here, but sometimes I think the unnecessary violence, gore and sex make it hard to navigate. Also, it seems you've created quite the plot here, but my question is, do you have the ending? And it seems that it story is going in circles. LV/HG in HER time, then with HG/HP and you made him into a psycho rapist (yet, Voldey is the normal one in this story which still kind of baffles me if HP is supposed to be inherently good), then back to LV/HG, throw in some LM/RStg/SS/LV/HG and I'm just whoaaa, the throw in Draco, and then kill of LM, resurrect him and throw Hermione back in time to a younger LV who apparently was sexually abused as a child, and if that wasn't enough Slughorn is a child predator and Hermione is being stalked by the OTHER Dark Wizard ... ta da! ... GG! I skipped over a of the violence, not going to lie about that -- but I do like the plot, I just wish that it was a little more structured or was leading to an ending rather than another time-turning-character twisting plot loop! Sorry, but it irks me. I feel like there about 3 individual stories that could have been put up here with beginnings and endings.
Now, I really like the complexities that you created in your own universe for LV, SS and DM especially. I find it interesting and atypical to the usual fanfics in the HP Universe. I really like the plot too, but like I said, I think it could be 3 stories, if not 2 stories with a beginning and a solid ending. I like your interpretation of Abraxas too. That's always the interesting thing about time turner fics too, is how you create characters that were simply mentioned and hinted at in canon. I really enjoy your Abraxas. I think you write him the way I imagined him to be as well. It's okay that you don't like Ginny, I don't either, so kudos to just making her a traitor and getting rid of her. I absolutely choked with laughter when Draco called Hermione's S.P.E.W "vomit." I also was cracking up with giggles at his wanting to stay a pet ferret that LV had to conjure a cat basket for him. I found it utterly amusing too. Absolutely amusing. Oh and the first time you did the LV/DM/SS/HG pairing at the beginning, I was laughing a lot at the polyjuiced DM as LV... hysterical!!!
All in all, I do like this story, sooooooooooooo I hope you don't take this as a loathing flame, because it isn't.
...That being said, UPDATE and COMPLETE the story!!! Pretty please :) I want to know what happens!!! :D
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