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Reviews for Precious Mudblood

By : magentasouth
  • From ANON - simi nightmares on November 14, 2011
    I'm really enjoying the story and would love to see it continued. The characters and story line is a complex and captivating, please don't leave the story unfinished
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  • From AlasseaM on November 13, 2011
    The story line is really good, and you write amazingly and such, but I'm soo sorry, I can't continue this. I feel so bad with Hermione/Snape that I felt disgusted most of the time. So, so sorry I had to stop at chapter 19! Too much! If I can be assured that Snape/Hermione won't be in future chapters I would read it, just to reach it, but apparently Voldemort needs him to, so I have no hope of a pure Hermione/Voldemort.r
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  • From N2vivaria on November 09, 2011
    I only started reading fanfiction a few months ago (it was a complete accident really. I was looking up Fenrir, the Norse god, and...well...ended up here...but enough about me) and I'm pretty sure this was the first Tomione story I read. I've since read what feels like half a billion, going through everything by Lady Miya, Nerys and Serpent in the Red just to name a few. None have ever come close to unhinging me the way this story does. It is, by far, the most involved I've ever felt in a story. I've screamed, laughed and completely lost my sanity in front of this screen thanks to you. This is amazing work. If anyone had ever told me before I read this that I would not only read an adult fanfiction that threw Hermione, Snape, Harry, Draco and SnakeFace all together in one grand orgy but that I
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  • From ANON - mgn on November 08, 2011
    I really really am ready for Hermione to get to go back to her own time soon! This is the third time I have read through this story and I just cant imagine how it's going to happen, no matter how hard I try!
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  • From ANON - kate on October 05, 2011
    will you finish this?? i absolutely love it i always check to see if you've updated but not yet please its really good thank you!!
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  • From 0SarahBear0 on September 19, 2011
    I am not very far (ch25 or so) but am annoyed ... Harry's now involvement, which is NOT just a test from LV (as i suspected for her mark initiation) is utterly aggravating. I have read reviews for several later chapters and hope this is still a "test" but am giving up hope ... the character change for Harry sucks, it is wrong (I hope it changes) he should be bright, happy and the way he was. Also the sudden involvement of the "normal" world is too sudden for belief, I was entranced by your ability to transform characters personalities while still keeping their original charter style ... but now I am already about to stop reading no matter how fun Hermione can be. this whole plot twist was not set up right, i feel like I am reading two different stories. Its so sudden, Harry is too sudden. I wish 'mione was still exclusively with LV ad even if Harry had come into the picture she would already have the mark and be devoted. I havent read far enough but I hope you make the whole her taking HP's mark, etc, etc .... a sham ... If not ... I will read until otherwise is proven ... I love the story but honestly in all my years for reading and writing, your story is ok, but the plot needs work. It is too long, I am bored, I will scan for redemption. If it is not found, please update your other stories like "Necessary Sacrifices". Your writing and detail is amazing ... just with this story it can be a bit taxing ...
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2011
    This is truly a great story....I can't wait to see how you pull it together!!!!! Keep writing this!!!!
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  • From ANON - midnightermoony on September 03, 2011
    Once you get past the immense amount of ideals and events that disturb and/or bother you (There are so very many.. lol, which i think was your intention), the story/plot and suspense is undeniably riveting.
    I absolutely adore your Tom/Voldemort, his charm, cunning, masochistic, psychopathic and megalomaniac tendencies are all accounted for and so in-character that I squealed in fangirl delight several times throughout your story. Despite the very skewed (spelling?) morals and seriously messed up happenings, I am most definitely on Tom's side. I really do wish Hermione could be his and his only, and i cringe when she starts to enjoy unwanted sex from other wizards, even if there's a good reason behind this. It kills me!
    I sincerely hope you start adding chapters again in the very near future, thank you for sharing your stories!
    ~Mid
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  • From CafeAuLait on August 16, 2011
    I am really loving Bodyguard Hermione. I love the way she jumped in front of him and was ready to fight. I wish there were more fics of Hermione acting as sort of a badass Voldemort bodyguard, but someone special with a different mark, sort of like the snake and scroll she had in Lady Miya's Altantis fic.
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  • From CafeAuLait on August 15, 2011
    So I know I went in on this story taking a detour, but I really loved how Hermione rescued Tom and his subsequent reaction.
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  • From CafeAuLait on August 08, 2011
    Not to be mean (it will probably come of that way), but does this story even have a plot? I originally liked the plot twists, as I felt they (somewhat) blended into the overall plot. However, now I think it's all plot pointed because you obviously didn't do a thorough outline of this story. If you had, the story would not be at chapter 51 and over 100k words without Hermione having made some progress with her powers or Tom finding away to control them. And on top of that, she has now been transported back 1940's, after the she finally gets the mark, which to some effect should have been the climax of this story, which would have lead to falling resolution and then the denuoement.

    Not a single one of your fics is finished because you simply do not know how to plot out a story, which is why you don't know to end one. You just add extra elements that really don't add anything to the story or lost of unnecessary sex. This story reminded me of the Anita Blake series after chapter ten, all sex and little plot.

    You are a talented writer, but you are only decent because of you can not pen down an exact plot and stick to it. I know this is harsh, but it's only because I think you could be a really good writer. The one thing that drives me insane with authors is when they drag the reader along without any clear destination and just had more twists and turns, which do not strengthen but weaken the plot.
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  • From CafeAuLait on August 07, 2011
    Harry being a live and just as psychotic as Tom was very shocking. I liked dark Harry. I rant to know what happened to make him the way he is. I really wish there were other pov's other than Mione's.
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  • From CafeAuLait on August 06, 2011
    I feel so bad for Hermione. A person can only take so much betrayal and loss.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on August 01, 2011
    I just wanted to tell you that I absolutely LOVE this story. I've been reading for three days straight! Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I hope you decide to post this story at other sites as well, like grangerenchanted.

    I see you haven't updated in three monthes and hope that changes soon. You've got me hooked like everyone else in this story. I'm officially a Precious Mudblood follower.

    Thank you again for all of your hard work.

    Seargentlambchop
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  • From randomfan17 on July 25, 2011
    He's just evil isn't he, but i think he's not healing her because he's narcissitic and wants to punish her for some percieved insult to his vanity. I love this story, can't wait to see what's happening next.
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