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By : Goddess81
  • From ANON - Jasmine on February 01, 2012
    ARGHHHH I have no idea what has happened but I started reading your chapters got to chapter 5 and ALL the words have been strung to =gether like a never ending coversation.....what happened?????
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  • From ANON - Saphirephoenix on December 03, 2011
    I love reading your stories. I was a little disappointed that some of the middle chapters in this one are formatted in one big and long paragraph. It makes it very hard to read and a little bit confusing.
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  • From MIverson on August 31, 2011
    Just to let you know, most of your chapters are all smashed together and hard to read. They have no line spacing. I am enjoying the story but struggling to read it as the words are all so closely spaced.

    Cosmyk
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2011
    Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.

    Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097

    Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.

    Thank you for your cooperation.

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  • From genjuro33 on August 29, 2011
    You are a goddess after my own heart! First Eric Northman shows up, then all this talk of the GOD Alan Rickman, what else can you ply me with... (I've got Mr. Rickman's autograph tattooed on my ribs, met him at a film festival...)

    Keep up the great writing, I think I've pretty much read all of your stuff at least twice now.
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  • From ChaosLady on August 29, 2011
    'Love Machine'. You know; that song from the old Hardee's commercial? I forgot the artist's name. 'It's raining men' by the Weather Girls?
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  • From ChaosLady on August 29, 2011
    You mean like Alan Rickman did in Quigley Down Under?
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  • From ANON - T on August 28, 2011
    As big and good as my imagination is i nor eneyone else i can think of could write a better capter
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  • From ANON - colao on August 28, 2011
    Snape in a duster...tasty...
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  • From ANON - T on August 22, 2011
    I love this story and cant wait for the next jusy chapter just a sugestion how about severus in an all black cowboy outfit and a black cowboy hat whith a skull ring *purrrr* and what about herms amangus therse nune of that yet
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  • From ElegantMess on January 24, 2011
    Your story makes me laugh I love it!! And your author notes had me absolutely rolling, Harry dancing off to Hero, and Siruis with his pick up lines, so very funny!!! And to your darling plot bunnies I give some lettuce and even some carrots. I hope that will prompt them to hopping about madly for you.
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  • From ANON - saxongirl on January 11, 2011
    Its good to see Hermione and Severus happy, hope that Harry and Draco will follow. Looking forward to your updates
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 11, 2011
    That chapter was wonderful, interesting and hot. But, I will admit the best part to me was the end. lol Harry pouting to get his own "hero" cracked me up! Thanks again luv, HG4eva
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  • From witchweaver on January 09, 2011
    I'm loving this story...
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  • From ANON - Jean on January 07, 2011
    I have been enjoying your story. As for your comment that Eric is ooc, I haven't seen trueblood but have read the sookie stackhouse books and he seems in character to me. He knows when to wait his time and when to strike.

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