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Reviews for Intoxicate the Sun

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From HavocTellenoi on April 03, 2013
    I don't think you've written anything I didn't love. And this wonderful little rollercoaster ride, breathtaking. I love, love, love the ending. Hoping for a short sequel where Harry gets his magic back, but it was still a satisfying, loving, glorious ending. And a great tale. Thanks for sharing! Keep up the excellent writing!
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  • From bloodshound on November 17, 2012
    this has got to be one of the weirdest multy chap stories you've ever writen... but you pulled it together nicely, in spite of the bizarre and incredibly varied elements. very successful.
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  • From ANON - Dopeydd on October 28, 2011
    Thanks for another great story. Some stories I read as you write and some I save up until they say complete. Just wanted you to know your stories are read but some I don't have the patience to wait for an ending that's how much I enjoy them.
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  • From ANON - lovefromAlterEquisincasethereviewdoesnotwork on October 08, 2011
    I don't know what's happening with the reviews but I do like this story and it's sad it's finished but also nice.

    On to something new!

    Cheers,
    Alter
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on October 02, 2011

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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on September 28, 2011
    Yay for 'catching' clearwater!
    And more yay for it working out, but but who is the would-be-traitor? Can''t wait for the last chapter but I will console myslef with the latest ashborn chapter.

    Cheers
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2011
    Your gift for writing is GLORIOUS
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  • From ANON - addiena saffir on September 25, 2011
    wow that was a lot more subtle of a change that harry made than i would have thought he would make. Alot more poetic and less intrusive though. I love how he took into account how people would eventually realize what the two figures meant and make them stronger with their belief. You said he has no magic anymore but you also say that the two symbols wouldn't need Harry's magic as people come to supply them with power unconsciously, so does that mean that he will eventually get some back?
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  • From wherdatcomfrom on September 24, 2011
    Bravo! I loved the way you wrote Ron. I get tired of the stereotypical way most writers portray him, as if he's still eleven and only knows how to whine and play some chess.
    I can hardly wait to see Draco's reaction to the new Harry.
    Keep it up, and I'd love to read something of those originals you said you wrote.
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  • From SParker on September 23, 2011
    about #48...

    Just in case I'm not here for the ending, I have
    to say I think I'll miss this unusual, complex &
    sophisticated story. You never knew what direction
    you were going to go, but that did heighten the
    anticipation factor.

    ..and I hope Harry gets his wish out of all this.

    So, I commend you on a job well done, mah dear.
    Until next time...

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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on September 21, 2011
    Hi there,

    I missed the last update but that was only my luck this time, 'couse now I had a double update!

    Damn two chapters and it's still not 'over' the machine part. You keep us hangin again.

    Did I miss something or is it still unknown who the traitor is?
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  • From ANON - addiena saffir on September 19, 2011
    *face palms* now i get it! lol can't wait to see how he deals with the next step.
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  • From SParker on September 16, 2011
    about #46...

    Whu??!!?? O_o

    ..and THAT'S where you stop???
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  • From ANON - addiena saffir on September 14, 2011
    Well hopefully the next chappie shows what that was all meant to achieve cause i'm a little lost then again i've been doing algebra and trig homework so my brain is mush.
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  • From SParker on September 10, 2011
    about #45...

    Yeah, I can see right now you're going to throw a
    twist in, to throw folks off the track, but I see
    either, Draco [unintentionally], Hermione [in an
    effort to do right...as usual] OR Ron [because he
    feels his friend is to far gone] becoming a 'traitor
    with good intentions.

    ...and those are just theories, in the meantime, I'll
    sit back & watch to see what you'll do and I won't
    mention this anymore until the right time.

    By the way, how long will this story be?
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