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From SParker on June 22, 2011
about #29...

You know, when Harry pulls these amazing lil' feats of magic, I gotta admit
it gives me a thrill. :-)

Say, what does your ideal Harry look like for this fic, because for me he's
at least 5''11, wearing dark green robes, wavy past the shoulder-length hair,
eyes are corrected, chiseled jaw, lean & muscular AND piercing, medium-dark
green eyes. *whoa* O_o

Oh, loved the comparison you did on how Draco was speaking..'his words flowed
like diarrhea'. You know...you have to be careful saying stuff like that around
me, because I'll latch onto that 'shit' & 'run' with it. :-D

The situation with Hermione is starting to become constipating, when will she break
out of it & do some real damage to Clearwater or will Harry have to intervene on
this one?
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From SParker on June 16, 2011
about #28...

Heat? HEAT?!? Come to Texas & I'll show you
some damn heat! Hah!

But, seriously, I'm glad they FINALLY MADE THAT
LEAP. Well, that is Draco did, hope there's no regrets
before they get to the REAL stuff that sparks
fireworks. :-]

..and it's good to know Harry has SOME control over
himself, so to speak. *ahem*

A burning room would kill the mood.
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From SParker on June 10, 2011
about #27...

Okay, I HAVE to say this, but...WHY THE HELL DID THESE
PEOPLE JOIN THE DAMN REVOLUTION!!!!

I've never seen so much bitching in my life, it's like
they have constant PMS. I mean honestly, I am NOW getting
the impression they only joined because it was Harry Potter
'leading' tha' good fight. :-/

...and they were hoping he would be oh-so victorius in ONLY
one week, with him wearing a freakin' cape on his shoulders
& farting the sun out of his ass. *sigh*

..and Ms. Thang, why didn't you let Harry duel Pedlar the Pill?
I would have LOVED to have seen her embarrassment.

Other than that, you're doing a good job on this story. :-)
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From SParker on June 06, 2011
about #26...

All I can say is I have my suspicions, but
I think I know the 'person who is writing to
the Minister, I'm sure Hermione is still struggling
with whatever was done to her [I had forgotten about
her] AND just as I thought, Harry is destined for
greater things. It's just a question of WHAT it is
and WHEN it will happen.
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From Cinder1013 on May 30, 2011
Poor Catchers. He had no idea what he was getting himself into. Sweet kiss with Draco. And I love how he's dealing with his father and that Lucius isn't just abjectly grateful.
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From SParker on May 27, 2011
about #25...

1. *gives puppy dog eyes* No more dragons? :-(

2. Poor...poor Catchers, such a lovesick nut. Is he based on
someone YOU know?

Anyway, not a darn thing resolved...looks like it's going to be
stalemates all around. I'm tempted to sit back, not say anything
and see just how you resolve this one, because you have me guessing
at this point.
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From ANON - kit on May 27, 2011
interesting chapter! Lucius' behavior is quite childish....kind of embarrassing. It seems like malfoy's parents are so two-dimensial. Without their money, social standing, and influence they have nothing to give or at least they are acting that way.
My question is what will they do to prisoners who fail the interrogation? lock them up in another prison? I'm thinking that Lucius will end up failing it by admitting to feeling hostile impulses and/or the need to escape. Will Draco allow his father to be imprisoned again? It seems that draco is constantly disagreeing with his parents, but will that be enough for him to be less dedicated to staying with them. Kind of hard to tell. I'm glad to see him maintain control of the situation no matter how erratic Lucius becomes.
huh! catcher's outright confrontation with Harry was kind of....amusing. I'm sure that people were pretty put off with how nonchalant Harry acted to the confrontation. Its worrying that so many people are leaving the revolution, people could end up giving away info to the ministry. speaking of which, im curious about whats happening with Hermione.
til next chapter :)
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From ANON - sp777 on May 19, 2011
About #24... Oookay. Just how clueless does Harry insist on being? I mean, does he NOT want to resolve the issue of people thinking he doesn't want the change in the way things are done in the Ministry? Me, personally...I would have been like 'ok, what are YOUR major concerns?' 'What do you want to see happen?' Then I would have spoke to Ron about it....and what's wrong with kissing Harry?
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From ANON - kit on May 18, 2011
yay! their first kiss!! *calms down*
hm....like draco said, harry's reason for being attracted to him is quite strange....i can't understand it, but a lot of people's attraction to one another is sometimes illogical. I'm sure Lucius won't like to hear that their relationship has further developed.
I enjoyed reading about Catchers being threatened to undergo pain if he spills any information to the ministry. He was getting kind of annoying. Harry's domineering side is quite intimidating, reminds people why they shouldn't cross him. Even though Catcher's got the 'message', thats probably not the last we'll see of him huh? jealousy can make people do stupid things.
Cant wait til the next chapter!
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From SParker on May 12, 2011
about #23...

1. Well now, it seems Draco has balls after all. :-)
I was wondering what happened to 'the man' and if the
little boy I was seeing would keep permitting Lucius
to disrespect him.

2. *sigh* I'm going to miss those dragons. :-(

3. I agree with Fred, something is up with Harry
and I feel when everything is said & done, he will
move on to a place where no one can follow, not
even Draco.

Now, that would be a different ending for a H/D
story...

4. Dross & Slag??? O_o

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From ANON - kit on May 04, 2011
hm....very interesting. I know that draco said he would do anything to get his parents out of azkaban and somewhere safe, but now that that has been almost accomplished, will draco let his parents view points affect his involvement with the rebellion. Lucius definitely doesn't seem happy to see draco allying himself with harry and acting civilized with a weasley. I think, It'll be hard for father and son to agree on this since lucius is still stuck seven years in the past while draco has become a grown man, forming his own opinions, and accustomed to how the world has changed since Hogwartz. Maybe Narcissa will help since she didn't seem to opposed to what draco has become a part of?
Cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter! :]
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From SParker on May 02, 2011
about #22..

You know what, after all the times I've seen how you
relate Draco to his parents, I think this is the FIRST
time I've seen the...tenderness[?]..that flowed from
Draco TO his parents.

Granted there has always been scenes that shows the
connection between Mother [Narcissa] & child [Draco],
mostly affection. But, there was another facet of that
relationship that came across and I'm sure you didn't
realize you'd done it...showing a tender side between
parent & child.

Get what I mean?

Anyway, enjoying the interaction between Harry & the dragons
as always. :-)
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From ANON - kit on April 26, 2011
Its touching to see how much Draco cares for his parent, but also kind of frightening that he is willing to do anything, even if it means to kill everyone in the rebellion, to protect and save them. Ron and Draco seem to have developed a grudging connection to one another. Don't see them becoming friends.....but at least there not at each others throats which is good since harry and draco are getting closer to one another. cant wait for the next chapter! :]
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From SParker on April 21, 2011
about #21...

Aww...that was such a bittersweet reunion. :-(
Kinda have misgivings about rescuing Lucius,
but hey...they can deal with that later on.

You know, the more I read this, the more I
feel that Harry is destined for greater things
that have nothing to do with the Wizard World,
much less this plane of existence.

But that would be putting a wrench in your plans
for this story, would it? :-)

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From SParker on April 13, 2011
about #20...

You know, I feel like Catchers...you want to do WHAT!!!
With the help of WHAT!!!!! O_o

Because, you have to admit Harry went into this plan, with no....plan.

I think it goes back to those Hogwarts days, when he's used to flying
by the seat of his pants, with only his friends to understand the craziness.

I think that needs to be explained by Harry, he's used to doing things
under pressure AND by the seat of his pants. BUUUT, on the other hand, Harry
needs to realize he IS grown and responsible for a lot of adults who are
used to structure.

ANYway, I still think the 'how' of the rescue plan is cool, crazy but cool. :)
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