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Reviews for The Nargles In the Air

By : AndrewJoshuaTalon
  • From FirmHand SlapHappy on December 25, 2023

    Nice and hot little story that simply begs for follow ups as they work their way through the Kama Sutra. Please continue.


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  • From acetwolf94 on April 08, 2016
    WOW! I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
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  • From Rocco-Sedici on March 20, 2015
    I really enjoyed this story. It's well written, sexy and made me laugh I only wish there was more!
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  • From ninesenshi on January 19, 2011
    Chapter3, more hotness. Very enjoyable series.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From DSTorres on January 16, 2011
    I've read the three chapters of this very entertaining story and love all 3. I do hope you continue with this story.
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  • From Koolgirl18 on January 12, 2011
    I love the Professor fantasy (that is probably why I'm dating a teacher and all of my fanfics involve Snape who--to me--is the most delicious teacher ever!) Again, I just love how you portray Harry as a regular teenage male (unlike some fanfics where he's all angsty and kinda wimpy. Keep up the good work! I'm dying to know where this story is going to go!

    Until the next chapter!

    Love, Hugs, and Kisses

    Koolgirl18
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  • From LordWilliam76950 on January 11, 2011
    Third chapter was quite kinky but not as good as the first two chapters.
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  • From Koolgirl18 on January 08, 2011
    What a hot story! I love how you write Harry and Luna. I feel that they are so true to their cannon character (you know not counting sex--there really is no cannon for sex since J.K. kinda screwed us over with not writing sex scenes with any of the characters).

    I love how distracted Harry is whenever he's in a situation where Luna is doing naughty things to him. I laughed out loud each time!

    Anywho, even though I don't normally like to read a Harry centric fanfictions I really did enjoy this one.

    I can't wait until you write more!

    Until next time

    Love, Hugs, and Kisses

    Koolgirl18
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  • From ninesenshi on January 08, 2011
    Well that (especially chap2) was incredibly hot. Hope you write more of this soon.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From flamingmoth on January 07, 2011
    HA! The blowjob scene was hilarious. Poor Hermione!
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  • From AirPirate on January 07, 2011
    I've seen the picture that inspired this before on deviantart. Its a very good pic :)

    The story has been great so far and its very like luna to just greet Hermione like nothing odd was going on :p

    I hope you write more of this because its a great read
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  • From tsukinotora on January 06, 2011
    Yey
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  • From LordWilliam76950 on January 06, 2011
    Hermione should have joined Luna. Loved the Snakeeater line, by the way.
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  • From flamingmoth on January 06, 2011
    Ha! That was too funny :) I loved your descriptions of Harry's libido taking over, and the tongue-in-cheek tone of the story. Nice work!
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  • From LordWilliam76950 on January 06, 2011
    Being a guilty Luna-lover, I actually enjoyed this little fic.
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