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Reviews for For all the times he saved me

By : lilith395
  • From HarryGinny4eva on September 11, 2011
    Thank you for not giving up on this story and for that update. I am relieved she is okay, even if she is a little yucky at the moment. lol Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From on June 19, 2011
    I really like your story!1 Made me laugh out loud several times, hpe a new chappie is coming soon! Thanks!!
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  • From on June 19, 2011
    Great start!!!
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  • From WilliamSpike on January 31, 2011
    Um..I've actually slept with women, and none of them wore a bra to bed. Ever. Just curious.
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  • From SarahLeeClare on January 27, 2011
    LOVE this story, thank you for all the time and effort that has obviously gone into it, i hope and pray every time i log in that it will have been updated, please don't say this is going to remain unfinished?!

    Thanks
    Sarah x
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  • From CryingCinderella on January 13, 2011
    Oh good grief, Charlie Brown. How on earth could you let him drop her like that? But more importantly- reign in your Remus! Dreadful that he couldn't control his laughter. :-p Now...honestly- breaky with the three of them in the kitchens? Dobby's likely to have a coronary.
    ~CC
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  • From Sairalinde on January 13, 2011
    I normally don't critique people harshly but your words "I write books" about your long paragraphs rankled me a bit. I saw you apologized for it but still...it was awfully rude, especially when you can't spell the word nausea and instead spell it nausia. I am not purposefully trying to be mean because I find the story to be well written otherwise. I am just saying that if you write books, then you know that spell check is a wonder.

    Also your use of long paragraphs would not be used in actual book publishing. I worked for 5 years as an editor. Just because you write books doesn't mean you edit them properly, that is what an editor does for an author. Dialogue should always be offset into its own paragraphs for a natural flow. You see this in professionally published books all the time. The long paragraphs particularly when written for online consumption can be difficult for readers to follow. I think that is why you were getting that complaint because it made it hard to follow when trying to scroll down a page.

    So as I said...your statement rankled me a bit. However, beyond the editorial quality the story itself is quite good. It is one of the more original plots I've read for a while in the SS/HG fandom. I thank you for being original, you find so many of the same plots in this fandom. I hope you don't take my critque as being mean, I am just being honest.
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  • From CryingCinderella on January 11, 2011
    She'll be in library heaven. :-)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 10, 2011
    I have no real idea why, but the two things that made me happiest in this chapter? The mental image I had of his mental imagery of squashing Dumbledore's head was the first. The second, the idea of Severus and Lupin as friends. :-) Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From CryingCinderella on January 10, 2011
    Oh Lord. This could certainly make for all sorts of interesting. And a wolf in the mix to boot. Good grief, Charlie Brown. :-p Now, what next, hmm? An awkward conversation which ends with Remus excusing himself? We can only hope.
    ~CC
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  • From scarlett78 on January 09, 2011
    Hi! I really like the story. Not quite Hermoine's voice - but as she has had a major life shake-up, I'm sure she'll recover :) My only request is - can you please break your paragraphs up into smaller paragraphs? It is a little hard to read on screen! I hope you keep going, I really am enjoying the story!
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  • From CryingCinderella on January 09, 2011
    Very nice description of the robes. Back to Hogwarts we go.
    ~CC
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  • From Andalusia on January 08, 2011
    This is a wonderful story! I love how true you are staying to the characters. I can't wait to see what comes of Sev giving Herm potion mistress robes!

    Please update soon :)
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  • From CryingCinderella on January 07, 2011
    This chapter was most interesting. I have to admit I usually don't care for the inner thoughts of the character being relayed so blatantly, but this is quite clever and well characterized. I especially enjoy the thoughts that seem to flow naturally between our omniscient story teller and what Severus or Hermione are actually thinking. In particular the bit with the bird and waking up for it. I am eager to see where this progresses to, and of course to see everyone's reactions about Severus being back at Hogwarts. Is she to apprentice him then? Or perhaps someone else and part of Minerva agreeing was to have him back on staff as well.

    ~CC
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  • From Goddess81 on January 07, 2011
    Loved it immensley, I can't wait for more Xx
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