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Reviews for Turn On The Darkness

By : CryingCinderella
  • From ANON - SilentRaven on December 05, 2011
    Amazing! I loved it so much. I love how I can picture everything happening in my head so vividly. Please keep writing, this story is fantastic.
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  • From ANON - Annabel on September 02, 2011
    Hi!
    I'm loving this fic, although it's very dark. I hope you'll update soon.
    Kiss
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  • From ANON - remmisty on August 15, 2011
    Wow, that was hardcore. I love dark stories, i am also glad you didn't romanticize the rape in this. I like how i am unable to tell what direction this story is going, at the last chapter i had no idea how you were going to continue it and even now i can't tell. I also enjoy the suspense. I like the way you portrayed Snape also. I feel like Hermione is a little OOC just cause i think she would have realized why Snape was doing what he did she's pretty smart (didn't she see him break his own wand when they escaped?) but then again she was pretty out of it and shaken-up from just being raped and tortured so brutally so i guess it makes sense that she would be confused, taking that into account and her current state of physical and mental weakness. Great story, looking forward to the next installment
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  • From ANON - Tinymandi2 on August 15, 2011
    Oh my goodness. That was intense.
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  • From ANON - Tinymandi2 on August 11, 2011
    Oh please please continue with this story. I'm such a big fan of your fanfic!
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  • From ANON - IamAnon! on July 27, 2011
    wow... really well written, thank you! You portrayed his reluctance in the first chapter marvelously. Though chapters 2-4 were getting a little tiresome, she fights he wins try to heal black out repeat, i'm glad to see chapter5 is getting a change of pace! what could have possibly happened to Snape? It's preposterous to think he went back to the dark lord and he inflicted the injuries, even if he could without a wand, he wouldn't get away alive. the only thing i can think of is he did it to himself... and i'm really glad she stopped his self-castration if that was what he was going to do.

    ...you think he would've made an unplottable safe house a bit... better stocked...
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  • From on July 25, 2011
    Oh please, please more!! I had read this story several months ago and had forgotten about it. I accidentaly came across it again and was pleased to see a new chappie. Since I do not know how to favortie your story or figure out how to get e-mail update alerts it is hard to remember to check in once and a while. You are a great story teller, as a matter of fact as I am typing I realised this story was the first one of Harry Potter's world I had read. YOU got me hooked!! Thanks ~d
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  • From ANON - mmoirai on July 19, 2011
    Hi, I haven't been on here in a while and thought I would drop in and see if there was anyhing new to read. I am really enjoying your fic and hope to read more soon. Thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - Slytherin_Me on July 13, 2011
    Wow, I am utterly gobsmacked. I am not a fan of angst at all..but this story... It's unreal in it's complexity and just sucked me in. And self-flagellation..I did not see that coming. Oh Severus. I'm just..wow. This story is beyond intense, complex and so very, very emotional. I am in awe of it (and you) and can't even begin to anticipate where you will take it. I eagerly look forward to each chapter..I am on tenterhooks with need for more! Brilliant work, just brilliant. Please update soon and thank you for your truly inspired and creative works! :)
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  • From BethanyEllen on July 02, 2011
    I'm so glad you've finally updated. This fic is intriguing. I hope you don't leave it too long before you update again.
    I look forward to seeing where their relationship goes!
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  • From ANON - Sandra on June 25, 2011
    Cinderella, I'm so thrilled that you've updated this story! The plot and your characterizations of Severus and Hermione are spot-on given their situation. One of the best "Hermione is captured" stories I've read. I'm looking forward to future updates. Thanks for sharing your talent with us! Sandra
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  • From GlassesandWhatnot on June 24, 2011
    Holy crap... ch. 5 took my freakin' breath away when hermione saw snape like that. This chapter was so beautiful and also disturbing... but it is my favorite so far. I am so looking forward to the next chapter, i can hardly wait. Please update quickly!
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  • From ANON - MJ on June 23, 2011
    This is such an intense story. I am really glad to see an update. I have had a craving of dark stories and this is one of the most dark I have read thus far. Sure, other stories may have more violence and whatever in them, but this is haunting. I feel so bad for Hermione.
    And Snape whipping himself, reminds me of those monks that whip themselves, not sure what they are called.
    I am very curious about the way this story will go.
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  • From ANON - mmoirai on June 02, 2011
    Love this. You have done a wonderful job with this dark fic.
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  • From ANON - deedeebug95 on May 09, 2011
    I love this story!!! I hope there is a way to follow it I have not figured out this site yet,. Thanks for a great read!! Looking forward to more!!
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