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From sarahdaye9 on February 08, 2011
Loving Hermione taking control!
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From Koolgirl18 on February 06, 2011
Okay I'll admit, it took me about three days after reading the new chapter to review--but at least I reviewed right???

Wow so much is happening in the story. Voldemort is falling in love (he would curico me if he found out I said that wouldn't he?) and he's getting very possessive of Snape. I really hope Voldemort decides to kidnap Harry and give him to Snape as a toy (hint hint!!!!) but I can understand if he simply kills Harry (insert sad face).

And you write slash very well. I don't go out voluntarily to read it usually but its nice to see it so well written in a Heterosexual based story.

Any who, keep up the good work! I really am enjoying!

Until your next chapter!

Love, hugs, and kisses
Koolgirl18
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From cennaka on February 05, 2011
I really feel for Severus. He's so needy and wanting, so eager to please, but he always ends up messing up or losing out. Maybe things will turn around for him soon?

Also, I'm surprised Voldemort isn't more suspicious of the prophecy. I mean really, Dumbledore just happens to be the only one who hears the most important prophecy of the last 50 years (yeah, I know it was overheard by a "spy") and then he keeps the seer locked up away from the general public for the next 15+ years. Is it possible to fake or manipulate a prophecy? Dumbledore was bestest friends with the previous dark lord, so he would know how to play up the fears of one. It feels like Dumbledore is playing the long game with small manipulations here and there until he gets exactly what he wants with no one the wiser.

Oh, did Voldemort remember to obliviate Bella? She could really mess things up for Hermione. Hermione may get a chance to try out some of those curses in a "real life" situation. And god, she would go bonkers if she stumbled upon all the muggles in the lab.

I have to admit I went through a bit of withdrawal these last few days before the new chapter. It's just I've been so spoiled by your update frequency and there are so few good Hermione/Voldemort (or anyone/Voldemort) writers/stories around. Please don't burn out and I hope your move went well!
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From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2011
Love the dynamic between Hermione, Severus, and the Dark Lord. I was kinda disappointed when you so abruptly threw Severus out earlier in the story. It is a very interesting backstory though, his relationship with DL. But, please no more snarry. The one chapter almost made me give this story up too. If you must go that way - please give a head's up. I can't abide reading it, so I would rather not get any more invested in this tale if that is going to happen. I really do like your writing style though....very nice!!
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From iheartskittles on February 01, 2011
I really love your story! It's very interesting and original. Thanks!
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From Koolgirl18 on January 27, 2011
Oh Harry has to run away to Voldemort!! Please let him get away! Dumbledore is so evil in this fic he can't kill Harry--I'll cry if he does (and its strange because I don't even like Harry's character). To be honest thought I really want to see more Snarry sex (which again is strange because I don't normally read the Snarry pairing)

Anywho--great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Until next chapter!

Koolgirl18
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From sarahdaye9 on January 25, 2011
I am so intrigued by the relationship with Severus, the Dark Lord and Hermione!
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From Koolgirl18 on January 24, 2011
*sniggers* Voldemort is falling hard for her!

And poor Snape--he's damned if he do and damned if he don't. I think he'll be able to be with both sexually again soon but at the moment, Voldemort is PMSing like crazy--maybe next week he'll feel better.

I will continue to pester and beg you to let Harry run away to Voldemort--I don't expect the world they live in to be all light and fluffy--I just think him and Snape would make a good couple while Voldemort has his crazy mood swings (take this begging as a compliment--I typically can't stand Harry but you fleshed out his character so well in this story that I want him to stay).

Okay I'm done with my random rants. I don't feel too bad for it being random because I know how writers love reviews, regardless of their order (unless its a flame--which in that case, writers don't like them much).

Alright I'm really done now I promise! :D

Until your next chapter

Love, hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18
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From QueenRuby on January 24, 2011
Yay you updated and I love this story but don't forget PM. It's probably why I don't post more then one story at a time. Even though I have three or more started to write.
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From Koolgirl18 on January 22, 2011
Yay! Finally, Harry going to get some insight as to what's really happening--then again, knowing Harry--he's going to go about confronting Dumbledore the wrong way. Dumbledore's going either lock him up or obliviate him.

*tsk tsk tsk*

When will Harry learn?

And Voldemort--he's already half way in love with Hermione and trying to fight it! *snort* Like that's going to work.

And he's being pretty damn selfish about giving up the obvious wand choices for Hermione. If he really wants her to be a successful apprentice, he has to give her the wand that will better work for her.

Alas, this is Voldemort we're talking about so all of his selfish and overtly masculine actions make sense.

I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Until next chapter!

Love, hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18
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From sarahdaye9 on January 22, 2011
Oooh he is good! I can't wait to hear how Harry reacts to the memories
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From Nerys on January 21, 2011
Oh dear, I think I might get used to some Snapione in this fic. What is the world coming to? *sniggers*

So ... I suppose Harry won't be happy when he finds out Dumbledore tried to kill Hermione. Another one who can switch sides. XDDD

Anyway, since I am not at home, I have to go. Will try to leave a more constructive review once I am back home next week.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! (sniggers; the joys of revenge!)

xx Nerys

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From ideefixe77 on January 20, 2011
Ok, so I am absolutely terrible and selfish about leaving reviews. So I just wanted to tell you that I am absolutely obsessed with all of your Hermione stories. (I'm not sure I can handle one where she is killed quite yet. Kill anyone else and I can get behind it, but I think I associate with her a wee bit too much.) That being said I will try to go through and be better about reviewing because I know you must work incredibly hard to put all these stories out, and you totally deserve the feedback.

Ok so NS is so brilliant! The twists and turns are amazing! I love how Dumbledore is an evil bastard to the point where Voldemort is far more sympathetic. I always thought D was kinda evil but hid it well. I also love a little dark Hermione. It never made sense to me that she was supposedly the brightest which in forever yet always acted like a mildly nerdy 13 year old. Her character makes way more sense to me as someone who strove for knowledge and always found it easily, the dark arts seemed like a natural course for her. Plus she is a much more interesting character dark. I can't wait to see how this turns out!

As for this chapter, I can't help but think what type of psychological damage might be present from even the idea of being fucked by a demon. Yuck.....but awesome! I think I might be a little twisted!

Thank you so much for updating! Youre stories have seriously been my major form of entertainment since Christmas. Feel better soon!
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From Koolgirl18 on January 19, 2011
Wow, the plot is thicker than the air on a hot Mississippi summer day! Goodness so much has happened. I never thought of Dumbledore and others being kind of like Umbridge in making magic very black and white (although sacrificing innocent children 5 and under is dark in my opinion no matter how much you might want to tell me otherwise).

Makes you not like Dumbledore (and despite how evil you made him in the story--I still love him as a character!).

In fact, I was PISSED at Dumbledore when I read what he was did to Hermione--I mean, something about his 'good guy' persona makes him even more of a bastard when he decides to go evil (At least Voldemort isn't deceiving anyone).

And poor Harry--oh please tell me you'll make it so that Voldemort will take in Harry???

I mean I know they'll both bitch at each other for a little while and probably try to kill each other a few times, but I think Harry would make a good partner for Snape when Voldemort decides to get all pouty and not let Snape have any of Hermione.

Oh I love how the story's panning out!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Until then!

Love, hugs, and kisses,
Koolgirl18
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From QueenRuby on January 19, 2011
I really hate Dumbledor! I always knew he was evil. Keep it coming I love this story though don't abonden PM eaither. I want to know what the hell is going on there as well.
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