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Reviews for Who Took Your Virginity?

By : TwinPhoenix222
  • From ANON - kayla on February 24, 2013
    it was an amazing story, harry's submission was beautiful, and the story is just wonderful, but it would be awesome if you did a sort of sequel, with like just harry and a different dominant each chapter then a big final chapter with some kind of problem it would be so cool
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  • From ANON - jessica on January 19, 2012
    this is really cool, update soon! i don't think i've read a harem fic with female dominates and harry as a sub, but i like this one!

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  • From ANON - seraphiccandy on January 26, 2011
    Aw. that was awesome! and pretty darn cute as well ^_^ Very well written as well. The only thing that really bothered me was your use of feet and pounds. Please remember that Harry is English and not American and everywhere else in the world we use Kilograms and centimetres. lol, I have no idea how much 200 pounds is? alot ??? :P
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  • From griffonsperch on January 21, 2011
    I like your Harry, he's adorable!

    Your story is well written and easy to read, very enjoyable.
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  • From runewizarddd on January 17, 2011
    I know you didn't involve Luna in this, but I could see her telling Harry about the harem idea because she knew that he would need the support later in life, even if she didn't know him then. (I like Seer Luna, and Luna in general, she's such a fun character.) The various first times with everyone would be an interesting read, especially Harry's if it was with the Lovegoods.
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  • From freemaka on January 16, 2011
    That's a change. A submissive building a Harem. Good story, are you planning on extending it?
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  • From Kayrox133 on January 16, 2011
    So I thought it was pretty cool that Harry seduced all his friends. Lol. Go Neville! I feel he gets overlooked or told to hush up too much. His Gran, his housemates, etc. Now he is the one that brought everything to light.
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  • From StillHorny on January 16, 2011
    I was curious about all the tabs, and thought that it would be a lame story with the added tab of 'No Sex'.

    But I must admit that I was pleasantly surprised. The story was well written and you had me from the moment you said "truth serum". I knew then that it would be interesting.

    Now if you would only tell the story of each and everyone's 'first time' with Harry...you will make this reader VERY HOT and HAPPY!?!?!?! Hell, it can't hurt to ask.
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  • From tsukinotora on January 16, 2011
    Yeeeey
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