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Reviews for Why I Submit

By : griffonsperch
  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2011
    can't wait for more, good start. can't wait to see where you take this.
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  • From wackybat on January 17, 2011
    Oh I am really liking this! keep up the good work. :)
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  • From Tesgura on January 17, 2011
    I'm so glad you're continuing this story instead of just dropping it now that Harry's submitted like some authors would. Your writing style is amazing and I'm really looking forward to seeing more of 'Why I submit'.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2011
    I think this was a good idea on how to continue the story, I'm excited to see where it goes. But what was the mystery substance? Does it have a meaning?
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  • From ladyedgecombe on January 17, 2011
    Nice explaination on Harry's part, but I agree third person is much easier to write. Actually I don't have an opinion on first or third person writing, but I would love to have more of the story and it it is easier to write that way, I say "You go girl" just keep writing.
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  • From bloodshound on January 17, 2011
    yay! back story. *Happy dances all around you.
    now Harry can just concentrait on making his Doms happy. Pity about his 'friends' tho. Dicks.
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  • From yaoialways4994 on January 17, 2011
    Nice, but can you write the story in a third person point of view? I just think it'll make it better. Love it anyways. Write more :)
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  • From nekluvshp on January 17, 2011
    Yay!!!!! Three chappies all at once and an awesome lemon among them!!! Personally, I'd like it if you went back to third person. I find sex in first person a bit awkward to both read and write. You can't really describe both partners pleasure in first person. And I'd really like to see the events surrounding Ron walking in on them. But please tell me at least one of his friends still accepts him? Maybe Luna? I could see Luna not caring about that.
    Ok, so I deleted the first time I posted this review because I realized some huge wording mistakes I made that might have been confusing.
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