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Reviews for A Traitors Heart

By : inuren
  • From bloodshound on March 11, 2011
    i am sooooooooooooo hoping this comes back to bite them. sactimonious pricks
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  • From ANON - Kermit on March 08, 2011
    Can't wait for more. Update again soon. Your characters are very believable. I especially like Draco and Harry, I hope you will keep them together.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on March 08, 2011
    Excellent work here! I cannot wait until Harry bursts everyone's bubble about him welcoming them back with open arms, especially Draco!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on March 08, 2011
    I love how Draco and everyone is gearing up on the assumption that Harry will take him back with open arms. Seriously, I can't wait until the fallout when Harry owns all of them
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 08, 2011
    just because Draco tried to kill himself so what harry has died over and over again i do hope that he freed the next chapter so he can start getting better and get his baby for the love of god harry s been without them long enough and i still say that harry should be with someone else betrayal is just that it would have been diffident if he believed in harry but he doesn't deserve harry are even having kids with someone else
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  • From ANON - cleo on March 08, 2011
    I didn't thought to read this story so far, for usually I don't like the 'poor-harry-thrown-in-Azkaban-with-triplet-(why, why, why always three????)for-a-crime-he-never-committed' stories. But I did and I like it.
    I just hope these last chapters about Draco and how he suffered for Harry's betrayal doesn't go straight to 'Harry must forgive Draco, because at the end both of them are victims'... because they aren't: Harry is the victim, point.
    Sure, Neville is the traitor, but Draco is a traitor too, the worst for he betrayed the one he said he loved. What Draco had done, or hadn't done - for he never wanted to listen to Harry, nor wanted to believe him - it's not love, it's betrayal and there isn't easy forgiveness for this kind of betrayal.
    I really hope Harry will not be his usual goody two shoes self to forgive all the Order's hypocrites and forget that HE is the victim.
    Update soon.
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  • From Jan on March 08, 2011
    I care not that Draco suffer after Harry was taken, what he did was unforgivable!!! He says he loved Harry, yet was quick to throw him to the wolves with out a backwards glance, without a care that Harry was being raped left and right even while he was with child! That's not love honey. And Severus talks about Draco's self destruction, but what of Harry's? I can't wait to see what a fool he will feel when it is known the real reason for Harry's refusal to the truth potion.

    Please update chapter 10 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From dominique1 on March 07, 2011
    so draco kind of hinted that he new harry and he made a child but why didn't he go after his harry are maybe he figured harry would send the children to him at least i don't know if i want harry with draco i do hope severus regrets everything he said to harry love it want more love to see harry out next chapter but i also hope that other than his health that he is sane and leaves who ever he ends up with i hope that once he freed that he kick everyone out of his house and everything that was stolen from him give back on want vengeance love it update more soon please. and albus should die to i hate the way he acts like god i do hope once harry free that they have no control over harry at all no forcing him back to school are trying to trap him there
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  • From dominique1 on March 07, 2011
    a few good men love it
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  • From obsessed72 on March 07, 2011
    that was from A Few Good Men...no need for the hint
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  • From Dreamer27 on March 07, 2011
    Please give Harry back his children and have them know all about Harry and want to be with Harry and have everyone find out the truth and who has been raping him. Please update soon.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on March 06, 2011
    Excellent work here! I can't wait for the wave of angst when Harry comes out of Azkaban and crush's all those who betrayed him!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 06, 2011
    A Few Good Men
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 05, 2011
    just one more thing would it have been to much for the Dr to tell harry s kids about him because they supposedly went into hiding and am wondering if the guard wasn't Neville raping harry
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 05, 2011
    Dame poor harry know they believe him after 7 years i do hope that harry's freed as soon as possible i hope he gets his babies back they would be 6 about now but i don't know if he should take draco back because he didn't believe and harry for one thing and longbottom should die looking forward to another update i'm still lean toward harry finding a new love. beside i just want harry out and with his children and sane
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