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Reviews for A Traitors Heart

By : inuren
  • From ANON - Anon on February 12, 2011
    I hope the voices were just some weird hallucination because I think its rather despicable for his parents to blatantly lie to Harry about who had his children, not to mention the Healer and his wife's intentions of what essentially amounts to kidnapping. There is no honor you can pretend to have when a Healer disregards the wishes of the parent. Lying, conspiring, its all the same in this- though obviously it would work to force Harry back into the magical world and if he would choose to abandon the traitorous Wizards to their fate then you would need some blackmail to keep him compliant.... I'm just hoping for Harry to learn from the betrayal of his family and friends and become stronger for it, it would be a shame if he continues on in his hopeless weakness and forgive them out of some desperate delusions that they really care about him. I'm interested to see how you will make Harry grow from this though it will be interesting to read about a wimpy Harry's downward spiral too.
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  • From reamane21 on February 11, 2011
    when you get harry clear can you make it so that he can get his kids back beause i still don't want that healers wife to keep them.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on February 11, 2011
    So glad for another quick and amazing update! Hope for more soon! :)
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  • From Dreamer27 on February 10, 2011
    I don't care how kill the healer and his wife, but give the babies back to Harry and soon. Please update.
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  • From ANON - linda on February 10, 2011
    dislike the doctors wife a lot. she needs to die a painful death. Harry deserves to be with his babies. enjoying your story
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  • From hellangelhellina on February 10, 2011
    oh thank goodness for james and lily potter. for a moment i thought harry was lost to the world. on another note thanks for the update.
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  • From dominique1 on February 10, 2011
    all i can say is i am hooked. you like break my heart for harry and his babies and yet you go in give me hope dame your good. hope that harry will fine a true love get his babies back defeated voldemort and not forgive those who hurt him want more this so good. and gets his back and more. update yes please
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  • From hellangelhellina on February 09, 2011
    i agree with Dominique all the way.
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  • From hellangelhellina on February 09, 2011
    i like the doctor and the fact he took harry's babies in but his wife needs to be slapped. i don't care how much you love those children to wish death on their mother just to keep them is curl and immoral, and to me that means you do not deserve those kids. but i hope harry survive and at lest gets to know his kids. can't wait to read more.
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  • From dominique1 on February 09, 2011
    the funny thing is all your reviews want harry out and proven innocent but want harry with his babies we also would like for the doctors wife to die hate her for saying that about harry because her husband broke a promise. and their no better than the people that betrayed harry even if they wanted to do it a a good way. i don't care if draco loves harry they really don't need to be together draco should never get his kids or harry back it a good story when you make me cry and pissed at the same time good job.
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  • From dominique1 on February 09, 2011
    the doctor was sweet to take harry's kids but selfish because even if harry got out they would keep the babies from harry. so of to minds to see harry just fade away. or pray that he gets stronger and destroys voldemort and stripped everyone that betrayed him if everything and kids his babies back i kind of love and hate the doctor want more
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  • From dominique1 on February 09, 2011
    what can i say i love it thank you for updating. i do hope that harry does get free and gets his children back i also hope that gets with someone that will love him like flint or krum i do love this poor harry and the babies
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  • From reamane21 on February 09, 2011
    Give Harry his kids back and do something about that wife because i don't care that she have help with the kids they are not hers and i think that they would be happy with their "mother" then that woman.
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  • From Dreamer27 on February 09, 2011
    I agree with Allanah-x kill the wife.
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  • From Dreamer27 on February 09, 2011
    GIVE HARRY BACK THE BABIES.

    Don't let the doctor and Adele keep them, GIVE THEM BACK TO HARRY AND GET HIM OUT OF AZKABAN.

    I'M BEGGING YOU.

    Please update soon.
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