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Reviews for A Traitors Heart

By : inuren
  • From bloodshound on July 13, 2011
    I'm of twwo minds on this one. While I can see where Harry is coming from with his 'vengence is mine' attitude i also agree that neither sev nor draco deserve the whole gang raped thing... but only because no one does. While I agree they do deserve punisment I hope there will be a point in which it is enough and they can be left to recover... though dumbles can go rot. May his name leave on in infamy along with toms.
    the bond with Reylan looks hopeful, as does the potential tracking down of Harry[s kids, which is good cause he needs some hope. suicidal elemental = no fun for anyone and the wizarding world owes harry hard core anyway.
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  • From Jan on July 09, 2011
    Love it please update chapter 30 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From hellangelhellina on July 09, 2011
    i hope he wont die and he'll find his babies. this is so deep.
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  • From ANON - dominique 1 on July 07, 2011
    i think that ryalan would be good for harry and i hope that harry gets his kids i think that severus and draco should live and albus and voldy should die and that all the people that hurt harry should suffer and that harry should get his children back i hope that the doctor suffers a little to for breaking his promise his wife should suffer for wishing harry dead. want more
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  • From ANON - anon on July 06, 2011
    great story so far but its making me confused. i dont know who you are speaking of when you talk in first person. you can eventually figure it out but it might make it a little easier if you can put who is speaking (like Snape's POV or Harry's POV). keep updating though. its getting good!
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  • From ladynightvamp on July 06, 2011
    woooooooohoooooooooooo new chapter!!! I am happy
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  • From ANON - dominique 1 on July 06, 2011
    im of two minds i want draco and harry together and sev to live but i want everyone that hurt harry destroyed
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  • From hawkswench on July 05, 2011
    I didn't forget you, I have been checking everyday for an update. Snape deserves to get by lighting just on general principals for blaming Harry that everything was his fault for no knowing that at the age of 15 he could get pregnant. Of course Albus didn't expect Harry to live to adult hood anyways so why bother teaching him things he needed to know.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on July 05, 2011
    Yay an update! Glad you're back and with such a great chapter too!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 15, 2011
    please i really like that story. write more soon..
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  • From hawkswench on June 04, 2011
    I do realize that you gave us a lot of chapters in a short time. It has been a month today since the last update and I am chewing on fingernails waiting for the next one. Do you answer reviews somewhere else like other authors do? I do realize that aff doesn't allow it on the story site any more.
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  • From ladynightvamp on May 28, 2011
    When are you going to update???
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  • From ANON - gyuchin on May 08, 2011
    I love this story!
    Cant wait to read Severus reactions to the news that Harry and Draco have children! That Harry actuallly was pregnant and couldnt take verisatu... That he was inocent and not the Potter he ever thouth he was!!!
    Hope to read more soon!
    Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Frankie on May 07, 2011
    Hey, just a quick chat to say hi, am really enjoying the story and how you are exploring a darker, less forgiving Harry. I only have a couple of issues which niggle ( sorry, I am very fussy :( ) as I read. Firstly, Harry's name is not an abbreviation of Harrison and, even though you used it to show when Lily was speaking to him, I just find it annoys. Also, small things about the book and how magic works in JK Rowling's world ie a witch or wizard cannot apparate within Hogwarts. Just small things which take away from an otherwise good story.
    Frankie XxX
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  • From ANON - LadySeanna on May 06, 2011
    Amazing story. You are an awesome writer and I love how frequent you update! =D
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