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Reviews for A Traitors Heart

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  • From helga1967 on May 05, 2011
    I loved so far. Is very excellent work of hurt and pain but with the hope of the future.
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  • From dominique1 on May 04, 2011
    i say severus should find harrys kids and harry should save draco want more i hope albus powers are truly gone want more
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  • From JtheChosen1 on May 04, 2011
    Excellent work here! Dumbledore is getting his comeuppance! Can't wait for more!
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  • From smorris82 on May 04, 2011
    Ohhh he finally told someone about his children. I wonder if he did actually find his true mate in Draco, I guess time can only tell.

    I wonder who will find the children first, Harry, his grandfather and Rylan who only want to reunite the family. Dumbles who would most likely try and hold them as hostages to get Harry to work with the order. Severus who would most likely find them and return them to Harry in hopes that Harry will then save Draco. Mmmm i Can't wait to read more.

    Please update soon.
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  • From hellangelhellina on May 04, 2011
    i know i seem harsh but i am really big on betrayal and lying. i do wont draco to be in his kids life and i think harry should forgive him, just don't want them to date. be close friends yeah but not dating. i just don't see how they can trust each other after everything. i also hope that severus finds harry's kids because i don't think even he can come back after raping and torturing his godson. i do hope harry gets close to people and find love. but like i said there is just to much between he and draco but if you can make it work i'd love to read it.
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  • From hellangelhellina on May 04, 2011
    why does it seems that your going to put harry and draco back together? i don't like it! i will still read, but don't like it. i can't wait to read about his kids *squeal*. *frown* i know that dang doctor was going to cause problems, he better give harry back his kids. that baby theft.
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  • From ladynightvamp on May 04, 2011
    yes!!! he finally told someone about the kids about time!!... poor Draco I can understand Harry reasons but come on that is just heartless. I did like Snape begging that was a nice touch you don't see that very often.
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  • From dominique1 on May 04, 2011
    i think harry should take his kids severus and draco as well as remus and maybe tonks and go with his family trust me i want more love it update more
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  • From dominique1 on May 03, 2011
    yummy a bodyguard want more dame save draco have draco are someone knew draco
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  • From dominique1 on May 03, 2011
    I like that harry told them what happen in prison. i also like to point out that i normally love severus and i can honestly say i would like it if severus finds harry's babies and i feel that severus and draco no longer need to suffer because they suffered enough but i still hope that everyone else pays legally and that albus should suffer more than anyone draco are ready lost his mum and dad and now raped to suck i can say that i want harry back with draco and severus as apart of the family as well as remus and harry's grandfather want more i do hope that severus finds harry kids for him want more
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  • From JtheChosen1 on May 03, 2011
    WHOA!!!! Lots happened here, totally blown away! Loved it all - glad to see Snape begging and Harry being impartial to it all!
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  • From ANON - Nubia on May 03, 2011
    In this chapter could not stop crying but also made ​​me think that what happened was horrible Harry is full of hate, I feel sorry for Draco in the previous chapter to see how Cain killed his parents and the Dark Lord was saying coldly that he would be its Amanat, and he thought he deserved it left me really shocked this story is strong and that is treason, hatred, vengaza a human being can feel.

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  • From dominique1 on May 03, 2011
    poor draco i feel sad for him
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  • From hellangelhellina on May 02, 2011
    yeah draco's an ass but even he doesn't deserve what he's about to get.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on April 30, 2011
    Extremely hardcore here - though I have no pity for Draco at all. And I bet Harry won't either. Great work here!
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