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Reviews for A Traitors Heart

By : inuren
  • From dominique1 on April 13, 2011
    okay so doctor didn't put the babies in his report and remus is coming backand i still say draco doesn't deserve harry because his hot for harrys alternated form any way want more love this story i also want everyone to suffer harry should give his granfather a chance and see if he would help harry get back his children
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  • From JtheChosen1 on April 13, 2011
    Nice little chapter here! I was wondering if the Daily Prophet was it or not then I scrolled down. Great work, can't wait to see Harry kick Draco's butt!
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  • From bloodshound on April 13, 2011
    i'd say it worked pretty wedll
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  • From WolfPup5683 on April 10, 2011
    great chappy hope you continue it soon
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  • From bloodshound on April 10, 2011
    Malfoy, malfoy, malfoy. *shakes head at him.
    seriously, after what he did he really needs to leave well enough alone.
    will we be hearing anymore about Harry's kids? I can't see him just buggering off to be an elemental and leaving them hanging considering the results of his life when left parentless.
    btw, some further indication of when you're shifting perspective would be good. I can mostly pick it up but it's still a bit confusign.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on April 09, 2011
    I love it and hope to see more.

    please, put me on your update list, annabear74@gmail.com is my address. thank you!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on April 09, 2011
    Oh now THAT was a bi*chslap!!!! Go Harry!!!!

    Excellent work here, the wait for waorth it!
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  • From smorris82 on April 09, 2011
    Ohhh beautifully written.
    They say 'Revenge is a dish best served cold' and to be honest with you the way you have Harry getting his revenge is fun to read.
    Would love it if Harry could get his children back before anyone found out about them and kept them hidden from everyone, Would also love it if Harry took on Dobby's family as his elfs.

    Keep up the great work.

    SM
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  • From ladynightvamp on April 09, 2011
    I liked this chapter.. payback is a bitch!!
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  • From hawkswench on April 09, 2011
    Very good chapter, are you going to have snape think about and figure out why someone would refuse the truth potion (can not spell what it is)? Or are you going to have him too busy with the investigation?
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  • From bloodshound on April 09, 2011
    well, ouch, bitter much. Still he has a right to be. I hope Sev doesn't get his licences pulled. He's the best of a bad bunch so far. About the elemental thing, could Harry be any further in denial. though i do like the idea of him nuking Azkaban. Their treatment of him was horrendus.
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  • From dominique1 on April 09, 2011
    yeah i started looking forward to more come on harry more damage and get your babies why hasn't snape told draco about his children yet
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  • From doxiesmom14 on April 09, 2011
    its a good story...what is he doing to get his kids back? why does he have to be so mean to his great grandfather?
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  • From puffpear23 on April 02, 2011
    I love your story!! Congrats on doing such a GREAT job! :)
    It's great but at the same time, awwww i hate Harry being evil! I mean, it's understandable after all he's been through but still! DARN!
    It's still great though and you can take any approach you like. I just want Draco to find out about his kids and him to make up with Harry!
    Hey, a girl can dream right?
    Well, i will try to be patient until the next chapter of creative genius! :)

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  • From hellangelhellina on April 02, 2011
    it's been a while but i still love this story and i can't wait to read more.
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