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Reviews for A Traitors Heart

By : inuren
  • From dominique1 on April 02, 2011
    that was so cute with the kitten wanting more
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  • From ladynightvamp on April 01, 2011
    ok that was a awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how cute... Now to the question at hand when is the pay-back going to start and what about Harry's kids?
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  • From Jaylagal on March 30, 2011
    I loved this chapter. I loved how Dobby seemed to take his own pleasure in sending Ginny and Albus into the Black Lake.
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  • From dominique1 on March 30, 2011
    i love that dobby threw albus out that was cool and at least herimone using her head
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  • From Jan on March 30, 2011
    LOL! Gods I love Dobby, Please update chapter 19 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From JtheChosen1 on March 30, 2011
    Great transition from the back story to the actual plot and drama! Maybe there's some hope for Hermoine, she seems to understand the seriousness of Harry's anger. Maybe one day, he can forgive her. Ron and Ginny though, pfft yeah right!

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From Ewe on March 30, 2011
    LOL I forgot that Longbottom was the bad guy in this story. Sorry about that. well that answers that question about him. I am used to seeing longbottom as a good guy or at least a guy that is on harry's side. It is interesting to see him as a bad guy.
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  • From Rainbow12004 on March 30, 2011
    i love this story
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  • From Jan on March 30, 2011
    Please update chapter 18 soon.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on March 30, 2011
    I was laughing at the end lol "Get the hell away from my door!" Obviously Harry is approaching then end of his patience, can't wait for him to go off on someone :)
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  • From Ewe on March 30, 2011
    Oh My God! This is really good! Please write more i can't wait to see where it goes from here. Harry should get his kids back. it would be funny to see all of the peoples faces when they see the kids. snape should get his ass kicked to the curb with this. he knows better. grrrrrrrr evil snape. *cracking a whip*

    Oh and harry should totally make his own side in the war. Light, Dark, Ministry (stupid followers of either side), and then Harry.

    Loved the grandfather character. he should get a chance to get back in harry's good graces.

    question: what about other characters? Luna longbottom twins charlie bill and such. are they all going to be bad or will some of them be on harry's side. if you mentioned this already then i am sorry for not paying attention.
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  • From smorris82 on March 30, 2011
    Beautiful.
    Keep up the great work.
    Please update soon.

    SM
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  • From dominique1 on March 30, 2011
    and i like gyuchin review i agree that would so cool to see the might severus fall because harry was protecting dracos kids and if his still a ass kill him
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  • From dominique1 on March 30, 2011
    i like harrys grandfather i do hope he gets his file back but i also want him with his kids looking forward to more severus should tell draco about the rapes just to see how he takes it i do hope that harry gets his kids love it
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  • From on March 25, 2011
    Is there a way to know when you update the story?
    Or should i check every ither day to se if it was updated?
    Thanks!
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