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Reviews for A Traitors Heart

By : inuren
  • From kogaluver on March 14, 2011
    Awesome! Now that's a chapter. Thank You! ^_^ Snape still needs his ass kicked even more, Dumbly's still an idiot and needs to be bitch slaped to knock some sense into him. And if the Weasleys are so dense that they think Harry will just say, "Hey, mate, great to be back," well they all need a reality check and to be bitch slapped as well. I would like to see in the next chapter maybe more dialogue between Harry and the other characters. This chapter was important and necessary, but now we need to get into some actual dialogue and interaction with the other characters. That's just my opinion ^_^
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  • From hellangelhellina on March 13, 2011
    now that i've caught up i have to say i feel no sympathy for draco. i think he's suffer but it was his own doing so he only have his self to blame and his parents and godfather are going to need a reality check, especially severus. now i can't wait to see how the meeting gos and i hope he castrate all those guards in the future. update soon.
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  • From ANON - crystaldenham on March 13, 2011
    i really like this story. please write more. will harry see his babies again.
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  • From helga1967 on March 12, 2011
    The description of the pain and separation of the two son and his girl is impresive. I cry all the 4 chapter.
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 12, 2011
    I'm so not like the gang rape it like you've allowed him to keep his mind and yet you destroyed his body and soul. his body by the rapes and abuse and his soul by taking away his babies and everyone thinks the are just going to get harry and that enough and albus no worst for ware your kidding right he was just gang rape and that ass master albus is acting like he stub his toe the ward said harry had to leave with them are be what i call rape in torture until the M.O.M. sent someone else please i would have left the moment i reach land i would have gone to 12 or the goblins to help secure a place while those bastards read his file anyway you know it a good story when your read read your review please update i hate the cl-iffy
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  • From ANON - cleo on March 12, 2011
    Short, short, tooooooooo short!!! I was waiting for a big, succulent chapter with the reunion and I get this little chapter... sob! sob!
    I hope the next'll be a little more, possibly with Draco and the other supposed friends, but I'm glad Harry's planning revenge: they all deserve it... especially Draco. I think it's better the children stay hidden for a little while. If the Malfoys would find out three little heirs they could try to get complete control over them (Lucius already despise Harry and certainly he'd welcome a chance to have a new generation of Malfoy without having Potter and we know Severus will gladly help him against the boy) and while Harry's playing the weak and broken boy he wouldn't have the chance to prevent it, whereas Draco and his lovely, supporting family have to pay dearly for their betrayal.
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 12, 2011
    we so need more i want them to know that harry was pregnant they don't need to know that the babies are alive i want harry to give as much pain as the gave him severus really needs to pull the stick out of his ass beside harry should have the money from sirius and his parent i pray that he gets everything he needs from them than goes to 12gp and i just want everyone to die i don't want draco with him bond are not bond i want the malfoys to feel the pain of losing their grandchildren and draco his children i want everyone else to just die the greater good my ass i want harry with his kids and voldemort and albus and his greater good destroyed please don't leave harry at hogwarts long that sad part is you just might do thatupdatesoon
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 12, 2011
    yeah harry out i do hope poppy report show that harry has been raped but also let the pain begin i so can't wait for him to hurt them all and albus should die i also hope that harry can suit the ministry of magic
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  • From hawkswench on March 11, 2011
    I do wish your chapters were longer. The way the warden has ignored the rapes of Harry when you have him trying to stop it during the pregnancy is a little confusing as if Harry got pregnant the first time what would stop him from pregnant again?
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  • From smorris82 on March 11, 2011
    Nooo. I hope that he doesn't forgive or forget.. I also hope that the rapes he's suffered are listed in his file Bbut NOT anything on him giving birth.

    Keep up the good work.

    SM
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  • From JtheChosen1 on March 11, 2011
    Oh Harry's gonna get them...I cannot wait!!!
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  • From ANON - Mishi Gohiku on March 11, 2011
    man it's just getting to the good part too really wish you'd update please
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  • From TheUndiscovered on March 11, 2011
    TEASE!!!! This was the moment I was waiting for since Harry's parents visted him in a 'dream' REALLY TRUELY looking forward to the next chatper(s) :)
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  • From kogaluver on March 11, 2011
    Damn.... I love the story. I just wish the chapters were longer.. But I suppose the frequent updates makes up for it. It's just, they're soooooo short. It's hard to really sink my teeth into it. I'd almost rather wait a few more days, or whatever, for more text. But I love the story and I can't wait for Harry to take charge again. I really can't see Harry ever forgiving Draco again and if he does, I hope that Harry really makes him work for it. Snape is such a fucking ass and Dumbly needs a good bitch slapping. I really hope Harry takes them all to task. But, I guess he has to deal with Voldie first ^_^
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  • From yaytoinfinity on March 11, 2011
    Good story! What Harry goes through is so heartbreaking. The Wizarding world's law system sucks- guilty until proven innocent?! I'm glad Draco suffered while Harry was in prison (it's his own fault for betraying and not trusting the person he supposedly loves). Harry may very well forgive Draco, but I hope it's not for a long time......
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