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By : Nerys

From ANON - Charlotte on March 13, 2011
I. Love. This. Story.

I was so, so excited to see an update today. And if you end it here I will never forgive you! Feed the muse and give me more. Please. :)
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From ANON - Mari on March 13, 2011
Another amazing chapter, with such plot twists. I never saw the marriage coming and you've been seriously taunting us with what a Seven might be. I love snarky H. she's the perfect counter and match for Riddle. I am still curious to see the longer potential consequences of those fertility potions she was taking for so long, yes I'm a sucker for big snarky Voldemort and itty bitty babies. Along for the ride, thank you for sharing yoru story with us its quite a treat when I see an updatel
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From ANON - crimson0707 on March 05, 2011
I managed to read through all that you've written so far. Just...wow. I've never seen one quite like this. And bonus...everything isn't all sunshine and daisies with Ron and Hermione ;) Your Tom/Voldemort is simply amazing, beautifully written and developed. He keeps that obvious evilness, his charming character, intelligence and happily enough some sanity!! I very much enjoy your characterization, the development so far and can see those two "bonding" over knowledge. To me they were quite similar, but yet very very different. But when I got to this chapter and then finished it there were only two lovely little words that popped into my head "Uh oh". She has been taking those potions like crazy and now she has gone and had sex with Tom Riddle (though can you blame her, I think not!). I'm curious...is she going to have one of those lovely light bulb moments when it all clicks into place of what she just did and what more than likely has now just occurred? Because I'm thinking one of them is going to have that light bulb moment and if something does come from this I can see Riddle being even more psychotically possessive as he tends to be over what he perceives as his. Also, drunk!Hermione was beautifully written and Harry coming was just the cherry on top! Can't wait till the next chapter, I don't typically review but when I got to the end of this chapter I felt compelled to leave one. Really really looking forward to seeing how you continue on with this story of yours.

Liz
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From StillHorny on March 03, 2011
OMG!!! That was one of the HOTTEST chapters I have ever read. I got all hot and bothered.

You maybe a tease, but when you 'put out'...it is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And most of it was Hermoine's punishment. I have NEVER read such a graphic and steamy spanking scene. BRAVO, BRAVO, BRAVO!!!!

Oh, I can't wait until the next chapter. I have chills running up and down my spine just anticipating it (much like Hermoine).

More, please.
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From Sommerlee on March 02, 2011
That was VERY hot. Yay for smut, and I can't wait for Hermione to break up with Ron!!
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From ANON - Marieve on March 01, 2011
Daaaaaaaammmmnnnn that was HOT! Finally! lol! I couldn,t wait for those two to get it on! :) :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
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From PoppyMLW on March 01, 2011
OMG or is that OML ;-) that was hot hot hot. I even sent it to my hubbie, maybe he'll pick up some pointers! Thanks for sharing.
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From iheartskittles on February 28, 2011
Oh Snaps! I wonder if she'll get preggers? And now Ron knows he's infertile. Hmmmm... I also wonder what he's going to want from her. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks!
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From TheLadyMiya on February 28, 2011
I know that we all hate Ron because he is an idiot in a lot of things. But he was actually a Prefect and all that so I think we are making him a lot stupider than he actually is in our fics... not that I mind. Just a thought that hit me when I was reading this. He makes it so easy to appear stupid... However, for the purpose of this fic, he needs to be that stupid ^^ And I enjoy laughing at him so... haha! Keep on!
HA! Still find it hilerious that Ron has figured out on his own that he is sterile.. but he doesn't want to tell Hermione because he thinks she is going to leave him. Bah, he is really giving her too little credit. I mean, if I actually thought someone was going to leave me just because my reproductive organs didn't work, I wouldn't want to be with that person. I mean, if child is really that important, there are other ways to get it. Adoption and sperm-donor and all that. No, I don't think Ron really thinks Hermione is going to actually leave him. He just using it as an excuse not to have to tell something embarrassing...
Oh, and I'm sooooo looking forward to seeing Ron's face when he finds out who designed those Shield Enhancers. Mohaha! I hope it's followed by an Avada as well... however... I don't think Hermione would approve of that no matter how pissed she is. Paah.
Haha, I won't feel sorry for Ron. He deserved Harry lashing out on him... bah. Little monkey...
I'm actually surprised they didn't copy Riddle's notes at ones. I mean, sure don't want it to fall to the wrong hands, but it is a bureaucracy-place. Don't they file away a copy of everything? Even the Unspeakable must have files as well? Oh, well... I guess they are just being all that secretive...
Voldemort (or, rather, you) have Hermione pin-point down so good ^^ Fear of failing must indeed be Hermione's greatest fear. Poor girl. However, when you are as good as she is, people are always expecting the most of you and then they will actually notice if you don't do your best and be disappointed. However, when you do do your best and get the work done they will be all "Well, of course you could, it's you" and nothing more than that... baaaah... Okay, personal issues... but still, it's annoying!
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From magentasouth on February 28, 2011
(sighs happily)
I love your stories! It's like a YESSS moment every time I see a new chapter.
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From ANON - Fleur K. on February 28, 2011
Oh how I cackled evilly when she decided to wear that horrid track suit! That was an awesomely satisfying chapter, not only did Harry tell Ron off for being a complete dumbass.....but Tom finally took Hermione! AND made her basically say out loud that she was going to dump Ron on his sorry arse. *applauds* I am sad that this is only going to be a short story, I imagine you are going to bring it to a close soon, which is disappointing. Are you sure you don't want to write 30 chapters instead? :D
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From ANON - shinobinaraku on February 28, 2011

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From Kohomologia on February 28, 2011
Drunken Hermione was quite a thing. Still, chapter two is my all-time favourite, with Tom perfectly in-character, magnetic, brilliant and dangerous. Please update. :)
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From ANON - Fleur K. on February 22, 2011
I have major sympathies for Hermione right now. Also, I feel that mentioning the bit about hiding her undies in her pocket is going to come back and bite her in the ass....aka Tom will be slightly peeved. She just needs to dump Ron on his lousy bum, did I mention that I am so happy you made him sterile? THANK GOD. I am pretty sure I forgot to say that earlier, but I emitted a visible sigh of relief when I knew for sure Hermione wasn't having any of Ron's babies....phew.
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From TheLadyMiya on February 22, 2011
Major Dissatisfaction? That isn't brothering well for our heroin...
Ron sitting in front of the telly and Hermione doing homework. Hey, that sounds like me and my brother! I wonder if Ron is watching wrestling as well... too bad I don't get so fuck any of my teachers. Boho, life is so unfair and all that. I hope Voldemort will be pleased with her at least.
Gaaaah, I know he would leave her hanging! All that nice clever conversation (which made little sense to me, I may add. Bell Jar, who? Although, I think that was the point. I understand, they were all clever there and he used some dark ritual with something out from it to be young and handsome again, why should I concentrate about that when there is a half-naked Hermione right there? Oh, that's right, I seldom complement you how utterly sexy you make Hermione. I would want her as a girlfriend, seriously. Great cook, clever and able to do as she is told with the right encouragement. Yep, that sounds like a girl for me!) and then the fingering and kissing and of course he would leave her hanging. I feel for her. Poor dear.
Wait, the hummingbird gets younger and into an egg and then gets old again. Does that mean Voldemort will become younger and younger? Naaah, somehow I doubt that...
Oh, so this was the Hermione-drinking-scene you mentioned ;) Haha, nice, nice. And I think she may be on to something with the whole Voldemort-not-being-able-to-get-it-up. Yes, that makes sense. In canon that is, he has already got hard for her in this fic ^^ oh, well... Haha, loved the small part where Hermione flirted with Harry, the poor fellow. I wonder how his conversation with Ron will go... am looking forward to reading that! However, now it's so very late again and I'm tired... talk to you tomorrow... or later today ;) Toodles.
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