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Reviews for "Initiation" By Veela

By : Daye
  • From ANON - Akuma on March 10, 2013
    n'arr
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  • From newtothis on February 25, 2012
    good, you know there are a lot of harry and flue story,, i wish there was some flue and ron stories, if nothing else, some show they care about him, they could train him to be a great boyfried.
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  • From cockroach62 on September 19, 2011
    it couldnt handle it because english is the only language with contractions
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  • From LifeonHiatus on July 06, 2011
    i love a good oneshot
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  • From ANON - corey on February 10, 2011
    Fleur has always been the hottest girl to write, the sex scene was a bit short but not bad, hope you plan on continueing this.
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  • From ANON - seig1812 on February 09, 2011
    Cool story I hope to see more of it. There are so few good Harry/Fleur story's out there. What does n'arr
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  • From SalonKitty on February 07, 2011
    My, that was quite hot.


    I like the way Harry's body was affected by Fleur's Veela allure even while his mind had regained his full sensibilities, giving him the ability to take charge of the situation. His attitude towards her mind trick was par for the course, too, and totally in character.

    And, ah, yes, Fleur's 'little death' was just what she wanted. What a manipulator, but it's almost as if she has no control over that. I would have loved a longer version of this story, but its brevity made the premise work.

    Good job!

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  • From haroon132 on February 02, 2011
    Yes I agree there are not many Harry Centred Fics on this site which is pretty irritating considering the book is harry centered anyways good job mate I totally enjoyed reading this Story.
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  • From Ice13 on January 31, 2011
    Nice! Would love to see some follow up appreciation. Mayhaps by her little sis?
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  • From leaseablue on January 25, 2011
    loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - ares88 on January 25, 2011
    you are no doubt my favorite Adultfanfiction writer. Just like before, you managed to write nicely about a pairing that is hardly recognized in this site. Thanks anyway and i wonder, will this be a oneshot or... will this began something more fruitful? I wonder.
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  • From SirZic000 on January 24, 2011
    great!
    continuuuue,
    Z.
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  • From ANON - cbm on January 23, 2011
    great thanks would like to read more
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  • From JackofDeath2445 on January 23, 2011
    Excellent fic! Its good to finally get some good Harry centered fic in here :D. Will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From Pete91888 on January 23, 2011
    Excellent one shot thanks very much. Unfortunatly there was a problem with loading the forum so I didn't see what you said. However I say once again thanks for taking up the challenge and it is well written just like the rest of your fics. I hope to see the next updates for those as well.
    Pete
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