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Reviews for Of Magic and Folly

By : Phantomhive
  • From bill560682 on November 28, 2011
    the problem i see with this is harry should NOT be tentative about kissing or feeling his mothers breasts, this is normal for them namely lily and harry.harry has grown up with these things such as calling lily wife his whole life so it SHOULD be what he knows as normal. also i see no problem with lily calling harry by the name james, my grandmother did the same thing to her own son. she liked his middle name better so she called him by it as did my mother. i had no clue until i was about 30 that it was in fact not his first name an that is only because he was running for public office an i saw the posters for it.
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  • From bill560682 on February 01, 2011
    voldimort should have no problem taking over, he has people working in the goverment like malfoy an the goverment keeps records on EVERYTHING. you do accidental magic they have a record of it, you get hooked to the floo network they have records of it, you pay the ministry to put up or upgrade your wards on your home they have a record of it. so yes they do know what wards you have on your home just by reading the report since it would list all wards on the home before they started plus what wards they added. the only thing that would slow down the death eaters is if you had the goblins upgrade your wards since the last time the ministry did a report on them.

    of course if the death eaters are smart they will use glamor charms to change thier looks and pretend to be members of magical law enforcement to get you to open the floo to them then they kill you before you even know what is happening.
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  • From bill560682 on February 01, 2011
    since this story does start just before harry turns 9 then that means lily has 2 years till harry goes to hogwarts to teach him how she likes to have sex. as far as lily telling harry about the secret passages used for sex by her and james just because she told him about the passages does not mean she told him in detail what was done in them. also you have to remember that if lily had not been in the nursery the night of the attack all 3 of them may have been killed. so yes do to that she wants to keep harry as close as she can at all time, an most importantly when they are asleep since the time it could take to get to harry may mean the difference in life and death for them both.

    now did lily manage to get out of the house right as the attack started and thereby voldimort is still alive and if so what has he been up to since that night. i mean if he has not taken over the country by now he is just a wanna bee dark lord losser. i mean he started the war in what 1970 to 1975 an has been waging it for what 14 years to as much as 19 years now an can not even take over one country when you already own a part of it's goverment. i mean if that is not a losser i do not know what is.


    i mean these lords do have to come to the ministry to vote on things so just use the imperiuse curse on someone to have them kill the lord then themselves. an before long you will have wiped out the whole family or the will just stop showing up for votes and hide in the house all the time. either way you win anything you want to put up for a vote. if you want to vote dumbledore out of office you can do that, you want to vote to cut the budget to law enforement you can do that too, they could even vote to make being a muggleborn a crime that gets them the dementors kiss. or if they want to seem to be kinder about it have all the muggleborns rounded up and placed in camps for thier own safety, seeing as it would be easier for the goverment to protect them from the death eaters if they were all in one place instead of all over the country.

    an if you like those ideas you can have them pop up in the story as flashbacks. such as siriuse remembering the day his cousin bella was named as head of the department of magical law enforcement. or malfoy remembering the day he got to tell dumbledore he was fired as head of the wizumgot as well as being fired from head of the international confederation and was no longer headmaster of hogwarts. an to make it easy so that malfoy sr. and draco can both have sex with harry you can make malfoy sr. headmaster of hogwarts. an of course with dumbledore more or less in hiding all the time the weasley family would need to go to the goblins for a loan to send all thier children to school. because the school no longer offers scholarships to the poor as they used to do because of budget cuts. an i am sure malfoy sr. would just love telling mr. weasley that one. so as a result the weasley family are not in debt to the goblins for the next 50 years an that is not even counting the interest on the loan but just the money loaned it's self will take 50 years to pay back. an of course with malfoy sr. as headmaster everyone has to bow to draco and call him 'my lord'. an of course since harry has spent his whole life being submissive to lily then of course he is not going to try to be the alpha when it comes to the malfoys even thou i rather like a dominent harry vs. a submissive one.
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  • From LordWilliam76950 on January 25, 2011
    Damn. Lily is pretty screwed up in the head.
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  • From wookiegirl on January 25, 2011
    Oooooooh dearie me child this story is so wrong XD and yet I am so strangely intruiged! Please update soon :D
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