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Reviews for Generans Purus (The Breeder)

By : jujukitty
  • From ANON - Lily on July 01, 2011
    this story is so good!!
    its sad that harry has suffered so much!!
    hope u update really soon!!
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  • From AmityVerity on June 30, 2011
    amazing.
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  • From aCharmedOne on June 14, 2011
    Hey I like your story. I'm normally one of those readers who are to lazy to review but I had a little spare time.
    Hope you will continue soon .
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  • From mariekjepower on June 01, 2011
    Awesome story, can't wait to see more. :3
    Update soon, please?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 18, 2011
    I liked the story very much, you have a very nice writing style and you pay attention to things that many other writers seem to forget (like spelling and grammar). I like the plot so far and find it quite original, even though there've been probably thousands of similiar fics written. Their main ingredient is Narcissa bashing, which I think is quite undeserved, so it's good to see that you've taken a diffrent approach. Also I hope you won't be changing the relationship between Draco and Lucius, so no threesomes, I don't really mind them, but I think that most authors don't explain them at all, one minute they are father and son and the next they fuck like rabbits and throw Narcissa out of the house, because , well actually for no reason at all.
    I'd like to know how it will all turn out, how you will incorporate Harry into Malfoys' lives or maybe his apperance will cause a small revolution and everything will change for them?
    Also I remember, that there was a small inconsistency - you wrote that Lucius and Narcissa are confided to Malfoy Manor and Draco is allowed also to go to Hogwarts, but at the beginning Draco was with Snape at Spinner's End, which would be a breach of the sentence (wonder what they were doing there). But as far as I can remember, that was the only error in the whole story.
    Hope you'll update soon.
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  • From ANON - Racheal on April 19, 2011
    I really like this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I was wondering if you could email me when you update, pleeeeaaaasssseeee. I don't know if this review thing shows my email address so I'll leave it here. It is flaming_moondagger19872016@yahoo.com. I know it's long but I don't have to worry about someone else having one like it.
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  • From ANON - Cbs on April 17, 2011
    Amazing!! love it please update soon :)
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  • From silversongs on April 08, 2011
    I'm really enjoying this story. I don't mind the length. You do what you can. Not everyone can write a novel at the drop of a hat. :) I'm looking forward to more Harry/Draco. Are you going to have them room together since they have this bond? Perhaps have Harry sorted into his proper House. Hermonies and Ron's reaction should be VERY interesting. I don't think Ron will react very well to the situation, then again if he knows about "breeders" he may be more understanding and Hermonie will be the one all out of sorts with Harry being with two men, and Malfoy's at that!! One thing I don't like about AFF is it lacks the update feature that FFN has. Do you have a list you send out? I'd love to be able to keep track of the story better. Thanks for sharing your story with the rest of us.
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  • From ANON - BB on April 03, 2011
    That was intense...Poor Harry!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on March 31, 2011
    Ok, just so you know, I love this story already. I can't wait for the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - Doodled93 on March 30, 2011
    PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY AND SEND ME AN E-MAIL TO TELL ME WHEN YOU DO!
    punk_elmo93@hotmail.com if you would please :D
    Love the story, made my eyes water up this last chapter...
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  • From Nightkitten on March 29, 2011
    Pless write more soon, I would like to know what happens neixted and why harry's magic keeps going out of controle and who he can do what he dose.
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  • From ANON - Night Owl on March 28, 2011
    Again, great chapter. :) Particularly love the dynamics between Narcissa and her 'boys.' Can't wait for more!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 26, 2011
    Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!! I need chapterr 5!!!!
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  • From Hambares on March 24, 2011
    I am glad Harry had to tell his story. That can only help.
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