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Reviews for Generans Purus (The Breeder)

By : jujukitty
  • From smorris82 on February 07, 2011
    Nice chapter.
    Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more.

    SM
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  • From wynja on February 07, 2011
    Hi! Yeah, I did understan the difficulty with were to put this, but I'm glad you moved it, of personal lazy reasons; I check this collection almost every day, and now I won't miss any chapters... hopefully... ;) I like the story so far, it feels original enough to be interesting, so keep it up! ;)
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  • From Dxinsider on February 07, 2011
    LOve it ^_^
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  • From hellangelhellina on February 07, 2011
    i love the new chapter it was really good. i understand why you changed where it goes, even though i got confused for a second there. i am glad Narcissus wont be a problem i thought maybe she would be but i am glad she's not. i acutely like her character she's very motherly. i can't wait to see what part snap plays for he is my all time favorite character. but i was wondering if harry was going to tell them about the dersulys? i would love to see how they react to such knowledge. i can't wait to read more keep it up.
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  • From nekluvshp on February 07, 2011
    Typical, I go to review and that stupid page saying that they're backing up today's stories pops up!!! It says it'll only be fifteen minutes, but it takes half an hour. Thirty minutes of personal hell!!! Although, I really should be asleep. It's nearly 5am here.

    I knew that's what he was forgetting!! I reeeeaaaaaally hope Harry is pregnant already!!! I love mpreg!!! It's an absolute favorite of mine!!!
    I can't believe Harry made all that blow up!! And I kinda like the fluffy, cuddly Lucius, just not all the time. I can't wait to see Harry's time with Draco!!! I can only imagine what THAT will be like.
    I had been hoping for a really pissed off Narcissa though. I don't think I'll mind her too much as long as she's not in the way.

    Update soon,
    ~nekluvshp
    nekluvshp@hotmail.com
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  • From Tesgura on February 07, 2011
    Hmm, definitely enjoyed that bit, what will Severus's reaction to this situation be if he and Draco are together? Loved the chapter and how you portrayed Narcissa's character. This chapter felt a little bit rushed still but a lot better than the first chapter, and I can't wait to read about Harry and Lucius's talk.
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  • From wynja on February 02, 2011
    Love it! It's a bit hard to find, though... I was thinking that the moresome-section might fit, but then again, there will probably not be any threesomes (?) and I guess that's what that section is for... I saw that you wrote Malfoy manner instead of Malfoy manor... a pet peeve of mine, so I just had to mention it, please don't take it the wrong way, since it's a VERY easy mistake to make... other than that I thought it was fine, though... interesting story so far, exactly what I want to read, even though I like Lucius a bit more badass and not so cuddly, but that's hard to write unless the story is angsty... I guess that as long as he stays in control and is a bit bossy/possesive he won't be too OCC... ;)
    Good luck with this, hoping to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - Hentfan on February 01, 2011
    Wow, I really like this (I like all sub!Harry stories). I don't mind Narcissa being there, she could help Harry, especially if the men get rougher with him (hint, hint). Does Snape count as a Malfoy, since he's Draco's godfather (I would like that pairing as well).
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  • From hellangelhellina on February 01, 2011
    defiantly what to see how this goes.
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  • From ravenwinter on January 31, 2011
    I like how this story is going, good job. Wondering what Narcissa will have to say? And what of Draco? Hope you can update soon, looking forward to more.
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  • From kitmistress on January 31, 2011
    nice new twist to the fanfiction world...well writen...wonderful plot and steamy sex scene, you desever an award.
    thank you for the story please update again soon
    Kit
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  • From ANON - dx on January 29, 2011
    this has been added to my favs. LOVE IT
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  • From Elvira on January 28, 2011
    Ee! Loved it!!

    Hahaha. Narcissa come in now? Ooooo!

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - orkchild on January 28, 2011
    GOOD START. I look forward to the next chapter.

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  • From freemaka on January 28, 2011
    I really like the start you have made. Very well written.
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