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Reviews for Falling to pieces

By : HHRDestiny
  • From MalfoysBitch on March 02, 2011
    It ended there! It ended there! I cant believe you ENDED IT! loved that story! But there is so much more you could do! :)
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  • From BreeSean on February 11, 2011
    It's over? o no, this was a GREAT story
    well set up, well told, brilliant and original story line! (and the sex was extremely well written)

    SEQUEL!!!!!!!!
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  • From StillHorny on February 08, 2011
    Wonderful, simply wonderful. I liked the hot, smoking sex straight from the door with no talking and NO FOREPLAY...both too hot for the other!!!!
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  • From OmenRequiem on February 08, 2011
    The end already? I was not ready for that! It is a very nice ending though. I liked this story a lot.
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  • From OmenRequiem on February 08, 2011
    Fantastic new chapter. I do like that we got to see another flashback. :) I can't wait for the next one!
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  • From StillHorny on February 07, 2011
    Thank you, thank you, thank you. I loved when Draco has to quite Hermoine's screams of pleasure. My favorite part was when he turns her around and bends her over.

    You are wonderful for writing this for me. I had to tell Mark, his pet got a special gift of smut today!!!
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  • From StillHorny on February 04, 2011
    I love this story and the angst between what Hermoine and Draco want and what other expect is palpable!!!

    Please continue. A few more smutty flashbacks would be nice too *wink, hint, wink*
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  • From OmenRequiem on February 04, 2011
    Where is she? Unless I was reading too fast and missed it. Very possible. It was a very good few chapters! I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From Divinit on February 03, 2011
    Am enjoying this very much so far!
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  • From brifelton09 on February 03, 2011
    There had better be more I like this story....
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  • From Firelady112 on February 03, 2011
    Very nicely done, not too much, just exactly right. And I wish my first time could have been something like it. :S

    There's one thing that always makes me wonder, though. Almost all fan fiction I read depicts the first time as painful for the girl. For me, it didn't hurt at all - and I can't imagine being the odd one out in the majority of girls. Is it really true that so many girls even start crying from the pain of their first time, even after all the preparation that's going on in these fan-fic situations? Hard to imagine for me, sorry.

    Just a random piece of my mind that I wanted to share, especially after reading another fan fic where the plot goes from "undescribable" pain to moans and orgasms
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  • From OmenRequiem on February 02, 2011
    Yay, a new chapter! I liked this one, Draco was very sweet.
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  • From OmenRequiem on February 01, 2011
    Fantastic two chapters! I like Draco's vunerable side, and that he's letting Hermione see it.
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  • From ginbucket009 on February 01, 2011
    Love it!
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  • From brifelton09 on February 01, 2011
    Ok so I love where your going with this keep it up your doing great for this being your first story. Update soon
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