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Reviews for Only One Night

By : tarrador
  • From ANON - Winter on February 26, 2011
    I'm in love with this story. It just feels like a story that's true to the characters, which I believe is what lacks in over half of these hp stories. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - M.B. on February 25, 2011
    hi! Where can I read the German version of this story?
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  • From StillHorny on February 20, 2011
    You are right, you are cruel and inhuman to leave your readers hanging like this!!! But, you also know that we will be back for the next chapter because of it. You are devilishly evil *wink*

    Please do not leave us haning for long.
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  • From ANON - lala on February 18, 2011
    I love your story. Please continue to write. Don't feel disheartened about the lack of reviews---lately especially that's just the way people act on this site. Most of us read a story and move on to the next one then the next then the next. We're usually so caught up in feeding our own addictions, in maintaining our sex-crazed highs that we hardly ever pause long enough to become lucid enough to form valid commentary on authors' works. That's too much work... These days readers mostly keep their criticisms and/praise to themselves. Some do it because their busy or selfish...some do it because they don't think they have anything to say or that their opinion is worth anything. If getting reviews is really what your after maybe you could try entering your story in writing contests on other Draco/Hermione fanfiction sites? Otherwise...it might be helpful, at least for now, to try to pay more attention to the quality of the reviews that you receive on this site versus the quantity. Who knows....maybe when your story becomes a bit more developed---a few more chapters posted---you might see more reviews? Give it some time. (^-^)

    Also, I wanted to point out that your not being a native speaker of English does not at all take away from your story. The level at which you write is spectacular. You speak or at least write English very well (and this may or may not be the result of your hardworking beta--I've yet to read any of your unbeta'd works) but I just wanted to add that you shouldn't lose yourself completely to conforming to how you think others want you to speak. Speak in your own way, clearly though, and we will understand. In other words... you don't have to worry about not being a native speaker of English. You think that you do not speak it well or write it well and that's ok...it's perfectly natural. But you don't have to blame your mistakes on being a nonnative speaker. You could say that you're simply not at the level of grammatical English that you wish you were. ( A lot of us native speakers use this excuse all the time) Besides, I've seen some pretty bad essays written by native speakers in English 1101. Your story doesn't even come close to sounding as "nonnative" as those essays did....just saying. Keep up the good work. Send my compliments to your beta as well. You guys make an awesome team.
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  • From AlexielAlmasy on February 17, 2011
    I would have had no idea that English wasn't your first language if you wouldn't have said anything. I like this story a lot, and definately want you to continue it.
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  • From ANON - lilashannah on February 16, 2011
    I'm loving your story so far and can't wait to see how far you take it.
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  • From ANON - Ann on February 15, 2011
    Your story is great!!!!
    Your English is great as well, if you had not mentioned it I would not have known that you were not a native English speaker.
    Please continue with your story, I look foward to reading the rest.
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  • From ANON - Pix123 on February 15, 2011
    I'm enjoying this story, and while your English is not perfect, it's fine as far as the story goes :) You are only making small errors, so it doesn't detract from the story too much. I hope you keep going with it, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From MelodyJoon on February 15, 2011
    I really like it. Its looks like its going to be a really good story, especially since you already have it finished, its good that you know where you're going.
    Don't worry about the language berrier, even when the wording is a little off, (at least I know that with me) it is pretty easy to see what you are saying. You got it down pretty good.
    I'm excited to see what will happen next!!
    Please update soon!
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  • From StillHorny on February 13, 2011
    Oh, this is a wonderful story so far. I can't wait until Hermoine is "begging" Draco for more.

    And will he 'fall' for the mudblood that he should hate or is it just physical?

    Please, please, please continue!
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  • From ANON - Steph on February 12, 2011
    I like this one a lot! I will be continuing to read any updates - though frankly, you should definitely seek out a beta to help you with some of your english! I'm not being rude with that comment, because otherwise it is a very well-written and interesting story, but I am somewhat taken out of the story when a word/sentence is a bit off. If I had the time I would beta for you myself!
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  • From lemonade8 on February 12, 2011
    I just found your story and I think you have a great hook, interesting premise. Every once and a while a word pops up that probably isn't what you think it is. That is a little jarring, and leaves some things in the dark, but I like what you have communicated so far.

    What is it that they think Snape knows that will help the Order? Is it just for vengeance about Dumbledore, or is there something specific they need? I don't know that Hermione would consider the offer unless there is something very important to be gained.

    Will Voldemort be able to break him out soon or has that prison break already happened? Are the dementors gone at this point? I sort of forget the state of the Wizarding world at this point. It was only a few months after Dumbledore's death that the Ministry of Magic was overtaken by death eaters, so is Hermione in more danger than Draco?

    And I could help you with your word syntax if you truly were interested. If you don't have anyone to help you with your english (which is really good all things considered) I would do it.
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  • From ANON - Dazabeth on February 11, 2011
    Well, im not a native speaker either so i wouldnt know about grammar rules, but at least for me is 100% understandable and great :). Keep going!! Im dying to read the next chapter :).
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  • From Recordkeeper on February 11, 2011
    i do not think its bad. there are actually only a few real problems with your writing. some parts are just not phrased correctly.
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  • From ANON - colao on February 11, 2011
    I'm enjoying your story and no, your English does not suck. Please continue.
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