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Reviews for World in Pieces

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ladyedgecombe on April 20, 2015
    I found this story last week and have enjoyed it so much. It was so well written and imaginative that I had a hard time putting it down just to go to work. If you are keeping a list, I would love to know when or if you do a sequel. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it.
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  • From BAFan on September 27, 2013
    Epilogue

    Sigh...wonderful ending to an almost perfect story! "Almost" because "perfect" would have included something overtly romantic at the end, such as a kiss. ;-) Glad to know you're not entirely discounting the possibility of a sequel, however remote it may be; this story just begs to be continued, IMO. Severus's thoughts on the differences between him and his counterpart were spot on, as were the reasons he gave to McGonagall as to why he shouldn't teach at Hogwarts. Ron's attitude towards him was amusing, and representative of a great number of the students' and staff's thoughts, I should think.

    I had some other comments to make, but as usual they've flown out of my head. Oh! Not sure I get what happened with the Elder Wand at Ollivander's. Did Harry's new wand somehow "cure" it of its less desirable characteristics? That seemed to be what Ollivander was hinting at. Anyway, congratulations on another great story completed! I look forward to your next one.

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  • From moodysavage on September 14, 2013
    Yeah!!! *doing a happy dance*I am so so so so so glad you are going to have the epilogue :)

    And I think having Draco as the anchor was a perfect choice. He was the closest to their situation and other than Snape he learned the most about our Harry. Awesome awesome awesome. Can't wait to see how Snape adjusts to his new world and reputation and how people react to him.
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  • From BAFan on September 14, 2013
    Ch. 24

    Harry's safely home, thank goodness! I hope Snape doesn't have too terrible a time settling into that world. Looking forward to the epilogue. Any chance that the NoSex tag might get relaxed a bit in it? *hopeful face* Any chance of a sequel? *even more hopeful face*
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  • From moodysavage on September 01, 2013
    Oh and sorry I didn't read and review earlier. I read updates in order and as of yesterday I was back on Aug. 22nd updates! Anyway... happy writing :)
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  • From moodysavage on September 01, 2013
    That was so awesome! Awesome awesome awesome awesome AWESOME! That was so perfectly balanced how destroying the geode effected both Voldemort and Dumbledore. And everything that Harry said to Dumbledore was dead on... nothing is so painful as the truth about oneself and Harry laid out Dumbledore's actions, motivations, and oh I loved this part... his INEFFECTIVENESS so clearly. It was truly a beautiful thing.

    And I loved how both Draco and Severus responded to Dumbledore. Draco finally had closure and will be able to move on after this and Severus showed his own reaction is the best way possible. Dumbledore really has no place to belong now and that is perfect.

    You do realize that this story has perfect pacing, plot and characterization. Looking forward to everything else you have planned for this story and by all means... don't leave anything out lol.
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  • From moodysavage on August 18, 2013
    Of COURSE Harry would never leave Severus alone to be tortured and killed by Voldemort. Did Snape really believe that he would?

    Now I wonder if Dumbledore and company will show up after Harry has defeated Voldemort or if he will be there to witness it. It will serve him right either way because he thought he was so important that nothing could be done without him or his guidance so it will be nice to see him eat crow.
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  • From BAFan on August 16, 2013
    Ch. 22

    Ooh, it's getting exciting now! And, duh, Severus should have known that Harry wouldn't leave if he were in trouble. I liked that Harry recognized it wasn't really Lily in his dream, but I'm worried about what other information Voldemort might be able to use against him.

    Waiting eagerly for the next update. Do you know how many chapters are left?
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  • From moodysavage on August 02, 2013
    I see... so when the horcrux is destroyed they whatever spell does the deed will snap back like a rubber band to destroy the rest of his soul. Very cool. Those eggs were pretty cool too lol
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  • From moodysavage on July 19, 2013
    *head banging on desk* I felt like Harry when Snake was explaining about the reverse horcrux when he told Harry he wouldn't understand lol. I'm not sure what they plan to do with it because it has just the one piece of Voldemort but it was cool how Severus got the piece to leave Voldemort.

    And I'm patient... I don't mind waiting for those reactions of the people back home :)
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  • From moodysavage on July 06, 2013
    oh wow... I'm blaming it on my little phone.... when you said "what do you think? Is it a masterpiece?" I thought that was the start of your author's note and I was already planning on telling when I reviewed that yes this chapter (and the whole story) is a masterpiece! lol well, anyway... loved this chapter. I really liked how Severus bargained with Harry to get permission to return to his world with him... when he didn't have to bargain but just ask! lol. I'm so going to love love love seeing how people adjust to this Severus and how close he and Harry are when they only remember how much they couldn't stand each other :)
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  • From bloodshound on July 05, 2013
    wishes is could smack dear al upside the head. moronicus much.
    btw, for some reason i'm not getting the up dates. i'm going to log into google to see if that works.
    wow, those are some seriously grandiose plans. i hope they can swing them.
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  • From moodysavage on June 21, 2013
    no lie... I saw this chapter and both fists went up in the air with a 'yeah!' to go with it lol. I'm glad that Draco is going to start seeing that he shouldn't be treating other Harry's like they are interchangeable with the one he was in love with. Because they are not the same person and it actually makes it to where he doesn't grieve like he should and makes the memory of his Harry unimportant because he has a 'replacement' when his original Harry should always be most important.

    And I so liked Harry's reaction when Snape returned :) They have a totally different relationship than either of them had with their own Snape and Harry and it's such a positive one that I love seeing it.
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  • From BAFan on June 21, 2013
    Ch. 18

    Ha! I knew it! Along with most of your readers, probably. :-) This is really getting exciting now. Can't wait 'til the next update.
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  • From bloodshound on June 20, 2013
    albus, you complete and utter arsehole. i wonder if he meant to kill their har or if he just screwed up and is now trying to cover the mistake his ego mania caused.
    well, draco isn't cured but he's not mooning and dazed either. it's a start.
    hmmm, they might not trust each other fully yet, golden and her crew and har's lot but they're off to a good start. that knowledge is definitely a key fact.
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