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Reviews for World in Pieces

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  • From bloodshound on June 07, 2013
    goodness, dumbles is shedding allies like nobodies business... that god complex is really doing him no favours at all.
    i can understand how har would be a bit clingy. sev is his touch stone and mentor. all he has really in an almost completely hostile world.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on June 06, 2013
    Yeah!!! I feel like cheering whenever I see a chapter of this story. I adore Harry and Severus in this and I'm so excited that Severus wants to return with Harry. (More cheering) Maybe Minerva or Draco could hold the anchor. Love this!
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  • From bloodshound on May 30, 2013
    smart thinking snape bringing sal in like that. dumbles really stabbed himself in the hand with this little effort. His God complex is truly overpowering. Delusions of grandeur much.
    nice that har can work unsupervised. Har's gryff heavy approach seems to be working in this instance though.
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  • From ANON - Zipp on January 13, 2013
    Hallo, I didn t die, like being your fan. I just don t have free time, so this time I am sorry for my grammer, as well to be poor audience. However, I would like to ask you, if you will continue World in Pieces and Roses, Made by Hands. Maybe I check just like once in week or two, but I am still waiting :D. Oh, and Happy New Year, full of creativity and luck, health, love..... and free time :)
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  • From ANON - Zip on June 22, 2012
    Thank you for continuing this story. No time for proper reviews or grammar, but I enjoy relationship between Harry and Snape, they learning from each other and valuing anothers characteristics. I always found original Snapes destiny so sad and angering, this story is salving my soul. I love it for many other things, like suspense... that cliffhanger with evil Dumbledor :) ... I can t wait for more.
    I love The descent of the magic story secondly now, but don t have time to respond and like other stories as well.
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  • From bloodshound on June 22, 2012
    well, damn. Sev pretty much walked into that one. I wonder if har will get to see him again before the end of things. So, does put the kobosh on getting draco out? I hope the Weasleys can keep har on an even keel and not let his Gryff ness out do his slyth cunning.
    heh, yeah, Percy is just so very anal and objectionable.
    I hope har's plans to connect with the other rebel types come to fruition.

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  • From ANON - Zip on April 22, 2012
    Harry is so Slyntherin in this chapter :). Please, don t make him addicted to Dark magic. I feel from this plot, that Harry could be a dark lord material in future, I hope he overcome it, and stay his good self. Will he take Snape to his universe? It would be nice somehow, problematic... maybe. Hey guys (ministry), he is Snape from another universe, so he can t be imprisoned for Dumbledore death. But Snape would not at least be alone. :D
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  • From bloodshound on April 15, 2012
    urrrrg percy is such a.... I think there's only two stories i've read where he wasn't completely anal. In one he was force married to har who lightened him and in the other he was half red cap... kinda difficult to be anal when blood gives you the happy happy joy joys.
    at any rate, gin is no light ally to have.
    hmmm, i wonder if it's dumbles, v or both doing interference.
    what will they do with the random d e s they collect? i wonder if snape will miss har for har as well as their best bet for a weapon. from his thoughts it sounds like he will.
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  • From ANON - Moon on April 15, 2012
    This is my favorite story written by you yet! I love alternate universe or time travel and you write excellently.
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  • From moodysavage on April 14, 2012
    I wonder... I wanted Snape to go to Harry's world. But now I wonder if Harry will be leaving and end up leaving the elder wand with Snape?
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  • From bloodshound on April 01, 2012
    setting the weasley twins loose on dumbles and V... cackles evilly. oh what fun!
    i had a thought. how hare they going to finance this. v and dumbles would be drawing money from their supporters but how will snape and har do it. Snape might have access to his family money but does har? would gringots recognize and interdimensional har as har? not to mention that siri is probably in nominal control of it.
    i can sort of understand ron not wanting to go to his parents and wanting a bit of independence but it rather back fired since it just put him in debt to someone else.
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  • From ANON - Zip on March 31, 2012
    I so love when Harry is confident leader and full of mischief against more powerfull forces (smirk). Geez, this story is the best and Parsimony was so good too, but this one is better. I just like twists and action and other flavored stuff in one story. I liked that "we all have ideas and we can use them" part. Delicious. (sorry abou grammar, again)
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  • From ANON - Zip on February 22, 2012
    So sorry I don t have time to respond, barely read stories, but I enjoy them profusely. I liked the mental battle with Voldemort and that Snape s secret house is wicked. Poor Draco got refused quite cruelly, but I don t think they relationship have future. I just got this idea, what if Harry told them that he can t die or in the end stay, because he is godfather of orphaned Teddy. I wonder what kind of reaction would they make(Hermiona, Draco).... maybe they would get realistic about wrongness of kidnaping Harrys from another universes. And what is in the original Harrys diary? (sorry for horrible english)
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  • From bloodshound on February 17, 2012
    oh, soooooooo much review fodder in this chappie. such a lot happened. *settles in happily.
    dumbles has lost his pawns, mwhahaha, suck it old man. Draco's been told to grow up and get a life... though considering they keep brining in doppelgangers i can understand his confusion and unwillingness to move on. har and snape have bonded further in that snape has trusted har to enter his haven... even though he probably didn't have a lot of options on that one. Where else would he take him? and the remainder of the Weasley's have pretty much signed on for dumbles harassment detail (grins evilly, couldn't happen to a nicer burk.)
    you also through in some concepts that in spite of your relatively simple explanations of them, head off into astro physics and other brain hurty mathy subjects... i may just borrow that idea of the box in a box territory... >> >. I didn't just say that. >.
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  • From moodysavage on February 15, 2012
    I love love love this!!!! Snape was soooo right about the weasley's being VERY unhappy with Ron being involved in something like this. And I loved the part when Harry told them just how many had been brought through. They are going to rally around Harry to help him.

    And you think this chapter did not have as much action!?! EVERY chapter you write pulls in more... more thoughts, more character insight, more plot developement... more EVERYTHING! I really liked Snape's hidden place, especially those leaves that are part of the protections that would take care of an intruder. Really ingenious. I wonder if Snape could make a house like that anywhere?
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