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Reviews for World in Pieces

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Claushiru on February 13, 2012
    Great story as usual, Lomonaaeren :) It's refreshing to read a gen fic from you, although I do wish Snape would devellop some kind of affection/attachment to this hardened Harry he never dreamed of meeting.

    Something's been bugging me though. It's about those prophecy boundaries, which are the reason why Voldemort couldn't be killed without having Harry do it. The prophecy says that neither can live while the other survives. I understand how the original Harry and Voldemort could be linked and closed off of the rest of the world in their conflict, but... Harry is dead. The prophecy is complete when one of the two dies. Since the prophecy is over now, why should there linger protective boundaries? Maybe those are reactivated when another Harry is summoned to this world, but what about in between the summonings? In turn, shouldn't Harry be invicible or at least protected from anyone but Voldemort? Those boundaries just strikes me as strange...

    Now that I'm really thinking about it... wouldn't this world original Harry be protected by the same prophecy boundaries as Voldemort seem to be? If Harry didn't kill himself, how could anyone be able to kill him when those boundaries should protect him from anyone intervening with his final fate?

    Ok ok, I'll stop this rambling now. Can't wait for another chapter ^^
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  • From moodysavage on February 08, 2012
    When I saw this chapter up I immediately started repeating 'I'm so excited I'm so excited' to myself. I really love your writing style. The line 'like mint on his tongue' stood out... gave a crisp feel. Darn...I want to write more but I'm conking out... literally. I love this story and others you have written. Haven't read them all yet. I'm saving them like little jewels lol.
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  • From bloodshound on February 07, 2012
    wow, that mental fight was most impressive.
    It seems in this world the dear Headmaster is more dark that voldi is almost. at least voldi doesn't pretend nobility.
    Hmmm, yes, i could see that. it might not seem it but molly weasley is quite a force in and of herself.
    I can still hope for something dire to happen to dear albus in the future right. right? can't wait till he realises Har... and Snape, have slipped his leash.
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  • From ANON - kyandoru on February 02, 2012
    I really liked this chapter. It was nice to see such a little reaction to Harry's past. There is a time and a place for everything and the time to do something about his past was when or just after it was happening. I am guessing, though, that Snape will not let it go after Tom has been defeated. It is nice to see Harry trusting Snape a bit more. Thanks for the update!
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  • From moodysavage on January 27, 2012
    How did Voldemort get through!?! I thought they didn't do the connection thing? That was very well done and creepy with the eye thing though. I'm really glad Harry told Snape about how he grew up. I like hearing Snape's thoughts on Harry's personality a lot. He is very good at taking in Harry's behavior and what he says and figuring Harry out. Very interesting to read.
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  • From moodysavage on January 26, 2012
    Is it wrong to like the fact that Snape thinks Harry could be dangerous and Dumbledore might think he could be a potential Dark Lord? Makes Harry seems pretty badass actually... I like it lol
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  • From moodysavage on January 25, 2012
    Chap 6 OH MY GOSH!!! I loved that battle scene! I got so stressed when Harry was snatched by Voldemort... and then Snape wanting to have a fit to get him back... and fighting Voldemort... THE WHOLE THING!!!

    A lot of times battle scenes are too short, or too bland with the details... but you are REALLY awesome at creating the tension needed for a scene like that... aw-SOME!

    And thank you soooooo much for not ending that chapter with him still stuck with Voldemort.
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  • From moodysavage on January 25, 2012
    ahhhh... someone was polyjuiced to look like Snape... there was no argument and it was to push Harry to get angry and want to spend some time alone... soooo he could be murdered... right? right? chap 5 down and more to go!!! :)

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  • From moodysavage on January 24, 2012
    I was late for work today and it was all YOUR fault!...because I just HAD to start chapter 3! *sigh* Oh well, it was just too much of a temptation. ANYWAY... I love how Snape is really picking up on what Harry says (and doesn't say) and is so interested if trying to figure out why he's different from the Potter that he knew. I like the idea of him being a mentor to Harry. Maybe he could go back with Harry... there is a void there. Now... on to read more!
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  • From moodysavage on January 24, 2012
    don't wanna go to work don't wanna go to work... I wanna stay home and read!!!!!!!!!!!!! that second chapter was just as awesome. And I have about 5 more hours of work to do AFTER work... and little ones... and... arrrgggg!!!!!
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  • From moodysavage on January 24, 2012
    oh my gosh!!! Just read chapter 2 and this is so good!!!!!!!!! Love love love love this!!!
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  • From bloodshound on January 23, 2012
    well bummer, thats right up there on the not good thing list. i don't think sev can combat a childhood full of abuse... at least not by himself... where the heck are they supposed to find ppl to trust though? it's not as if they have a chance to go looking.
    looking forward to what's bound to be a heck of a fire fight in har's mind.
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  • From ANON - Zip on January 23, 2012
    Update, yay! But, I am kind of confused, because I thought that Harry scar is healed from original world and there is no Voldemort anymore in it. I would like some explanation, because I got perplexed from moment that Harry mentioned, that he will use connection for information- I thought that he have just prophercy one now, not scar one, too. And why V. attacked so suddenly and that way? But such cliffhanger, damn. oh, and I like that talk about Dursleys, that you make it sound like real problem, intesified a emotion of reluctance to speak about that.
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  • From ANON - kyandoru on December 07, 2011
    Hooray! I am so happy you updated! And I am happy Harry made contact with back home. Now the question is how are they going to take it when they hear he wants to stay and fight. And what's going to happen with Snape when Harry goes back? Is he going to go to Harry's world or stay behind and pick up the pieces? I hope this Dumbledore gets what's coming to him.

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  • From ANON - Zip on December 07, 2011
    AHHH, update, yes. I don t have time, but I still read this, of course, silly me. This is wonderful chapter, for a moment, I thought that Dumbledor wanted to kill Harry, and maybe want just that. Harry of course have to save everyone, even another self. What a demented resolution, what a wonderfull reaction, sweet, scary, insane.... unexpected twist, just Harry.
    Dialogs triggered in me reaction, that I so love when reading - emotions, and I imagined, what I would say, or think, if I was Snape or Harry and then read what they relly did. Sorry for grammar, I wanted to leave comment, so I wrote this in hurry and didn t check. Another chapter, which leaves me with wanting more. How will look lot of them, when Harry says NO? I cant wait, especially for Dumbledores one. :D
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