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Reviews for World in Pieces

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From bloodshound on December 07, 2011
    *goes into frothy, incoherent rage along with Har. How dare he! HOW DARE HE! that senile, misguided, god complex, old GOAT man! Oh pls, PLS tell me he at least meets a grisly end. So far, his old, dark lord ish ways are making a come back. As someone famous once said "urge to kill... RISING!"
    Harry in any of his incarnations, is NOT a throw away item! Though it does amuse me that he can't handle a Gryffindor Har. *smirk.
    Slyth Har probably suicided (if he did suicide) to escape the old goats scheming.

    a few side Q's. did Slyth Har have the same 'helping ppl' thing this Har does and will Har and Sev be getting any more allies in this world. Cause so far it seems very them against the world.
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  • From ANON - Alice on December 06, 2011
    Omg, I think this is one of the best chapter in the story. U have out done yourself. No wonder it take so long. Love it, going to read it again now.
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  • From ANON - kyandoru on October 13, 2011
    I am so happy you updated again. Are you losing inspiration for this story or just have too much for others? I know you don't abandon stories, I just wish you would update this one more frequently. I love all the twists and turns you are taking with the plot! I love how you are laying it out. The interactions between Dumbledore and everyone elso are also really interesting. Please update more soon!
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  • From ANON - heartstar on October 10, 2011
    Yes Now does harry trust him or not?

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  • From bloodshound on October 09, 2011
    That'd make sense if voldi's easily raising the dead. a lot got explained in this chappie and I do feel sorry for Har. Very much te world against him. I hope he does manage to establish communications with his world. He's gonna need all the help he can get.
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  • From ANON - Zip on October 09, 2011
    Wow, This chapter was really good. The anticipation for what will happen next is even more pronouncing than before. To think, that you used mainly Snape and Harry, just two characters, to create this ...tension. You worked Harry to position, when even I, from Snape side, was wondering, if "sacriface victim" is not in reality villain. And I can t wait to see, what Dumbledore thinks about Harry. You play it so well. I hope that we could see headmaster intentions, althrought I don t mind to see them much much later ->unknow Dumbledore give me such a kick. Thank you for update, you made my day... eh, night :D.
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  • From ANON - Jettsetters on September 29, 2011
    I feel like you hate this story, you never update it. I understand that you are more committed to your other works, but I hope you update this soon! Good luck to all your other stories!
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  • From ANON - Zip on September 24, 2011
    I just wonder, did you drop this story? It s just too good to end unfinished :_(.
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  • From ANON - Sarahe on August 07, 2011
    Just wanted to let you know I think this story is awesome and can't wait to read more of it. I know you said you won't be updating it on a schedule, but I'll be checking in to catch the next update!
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  • From ANON - Zip on August 03, 2011
    Yes, another great chapter, really, this is my favorit story from your rich selection of HP. Espacially Harrys resistance against almost everything is somehow captivating, and also writen expresions, feelings and like did I already say action. It s really sweet fruit for me (ups, my grammar, sorry).
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  • From ANON - heartstar on August 03, 2011
    hmm Inderstandable... I like where you are taking this... More please when you can..*S*
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  • From ANON - kit on August 03, 2011
    excellent chapter update! I'm really curious to read about how the timeline in this world went.....it must be interesting, otherwise, why hide it from the wizard that can save your world?
    Albus is pretty manipulative and ruthless. He's quite frustrating actually. Kind of bothers me that no one else sees it but Harry and Snape, but I guess people prefer to be ignorant rather then face the grim truth.
    Hopefully Harry will be able to crack the code on the journal and get some insight into the other Harry's perspective of his life.
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  • From ANON - helewisetran on August 03, 2011
    you don't know how happy I was when I see chapter seven was up. I love the strong will and determination as well as complete confident in his belief against what everyone says in Harry. Another wonderfully long chapter. I would enjoy rereading it until your next post. Thanks

    PS: I understand what you mean that a relationship with Draco is unhealthy. I was just a huge H/D fan, hard to get rid of the hope that they would get together.
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  • From bloodshound on August 02, 2011
    wow, harry really ripped into them... not that they didnt deserve it. maybe sev will be able to free himself from dumbles in the end. i hope so as he's a self seving, minorly megamanical prick. at any rate, it'll be interesting to see their next move...and voldi's.
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  • From bloodshound on August 02, 2011
    well, that sucks balls. Not only stuck in a world where the war is nearly lost, but your 'allies' are mostly untrustworthy and your enemy a super powered version of himself. i doubt voldi will be underestimating harry so much anymore. Itss good snape is his ally cause the rest of em such balls.
    does this dumbles have the rest of the hallows as well? will we eventually learn why their harry suicided?

    ty for the update btw. been a while for this one.
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