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Reviews for World in Pieces

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  • From ANON - Kyandoru on August 02, 2011
    Hooray! I was getting worried. I loved their reactions to Harry coming back. I also love that Snape and Harry are getting more interaction, they are just so interesting together. Is Draco ever going to end up with this Harry, or is he just too mentally unstable from grief?
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  • From ANON - helewisetran on July 12, 2011
    another wonderfully done chapter. I love all the action. Your description of Harry Potter is very true. He doesn't believe he can destroy Voldermort, nor does he try to. He only try to survive, and in doing so...destroy Voldie. I wish Harry would reconsider the damsel in distress name Draco though. Lol
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  • From ANON - heartstar on July 08, 2011
    I love this story know you have a lot going on but when you can please update. Everystory of your I have read I love. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - sarah on July 08, 2011
    you seriously do not update this story enough. But anyway, awesome chapter, like freakishly awesome. Oh and a great job on the other stories. keepp being lazy about reviewing but count this review as about !0 for each story your in the process of writing.
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  • From ANON - Kyandoru on July 08, 2011
    Hooray! Go Harry show 'em what you got! I love it when Harry does something no one else expects. I hope you give detailed descriptions of their faces next chapter. Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - Zip on July 07, 2011
    YES, I like this story, I can t wait for another chapter. I am kind of surprised,that you don t have more reviews...ect. for Word in Pieces. I can t determine what to think about Snape, Dumbledore, Sirius, Ron, Hermione..., and surprisingly I enjoy that pretty much. It s refreshing. I like using magic, fighting, learning and whole active part. It s nicely balanced here- psychology of not believing anyone and action. To tell truth, I didn t like your concept of destroying spells and magic in Intoxicate in Sun (sorry, my personal preference, so I kind of stopped on 10th chapter). I take this one like reverse to that concept and I am trilled.
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  • From ANON - Zip on June 21, 2011
    I wonder, if you will continue with this one. I kind of like it. Everyone can be your enemy and everything is somehow different like you are used to it. Kind of interesting, because there is so much options (unexpectedness can be achieved quite easely with this setting and you worked that nicely from the start). Well, you have some knack for good settings. hmm, you said that you write originals. I just wonder, if they can be bought or read somewhere else, or you really just stack them at your computer.
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  • From ANON - Kyandoru on June 03, 2011
    "Oh, Draco...." is all I can think of to say. He is just putting himself up for a lot of trouble. Hooray for more Harry/Snape interaction! Thanks for the update!
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  • From bloodshound on June 02, 2011
    so, I'm thinking polyjuice, unless Draco got it wrong or Snapes lying. Then there really is a traitor in thr order. It'll be interesting to see the fall out of this.
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  • From ANON - helewisetran on June 02, 2011
    this is my fav fanfiction here. I love your original idea and the story development. Every chapter is so intense. Please update regularly.
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  • From ANON - SGOU on May 30, 2011
    This is my favorite story since Practicing Liars- and I really really really like that story. You are such a talented writer and I really want to thank you for all the time and effort you put into creating these stories for us.
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  • From ANON - kyandoru on May 26, 2011
    Hooray, an update! I am so happy! You always have the best ideas. And not everyone can do a Snape/Harry mentor fic properly.
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  • From ANON - fudge on May 26, 2011
    LOVING this story!
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  • From bloodshound on May 21, 2011
    as well they should be, you people stealing pricks!
    I hope in the end Harry survives ande is able to kick Voldi arse, and is able send word home, even if he can't go. Is there a reason for one harry at a time? Iknow they can only grab one a year but they could sorta, put him in storage or something...though i s'pose that's split their attention. It'll be interesting to see if template Harry did suicide...and to see if Harry can do something with Nev. He just needs a confidence boost, yeah?
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  • From ANON - kyandoru on May 13, 2011
    I really like this idea! Please continue, don't give up!
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