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Reviews for World in Pieces

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Cookies_B on March 17, 2011
    THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!! XD tehehe i like how snape is starting to see harry for who he is and is willing to help him! it was such an intense conversation! I wonder when snape will put all the pieces together XD i'm also wondering about dumbledore. If he's throwing our harry into situations and believing that things will end well just cause he's "the boy who lived" perhaps that's what drove the other harry to kill himself? i mean he wasn't raised the same way our harry was...maybe he wasn't as tough and couldn't handel? oi lols i should stop guessing XD
    awesome update!please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on March 14, 2011
    squeeeeeaaal ! you updated woot! oh man im so glad you did and it as an extremely awesome update. Loved the dialog between snape and harry. k well update soon cuz im ridiculously antsy to see where you take this.
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  • From ANON - Cookies_B on February 23, 2011
    yayyy another update!!!! Evelina is so cool! I still can't help wondering why the other Harry would kill himself, I'm so curious!thehe love how Snape is trying to figure out Harry XD I'm so looking forward to the conversation!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on February 21, 2011
    oh man that was really good. ive been checking 5 times a day to see an update for this story. i love the way this story is playing out. anyway... could have left it at a more cliffhanger of a moment or what? now im gonna be checking 10 times a day -sighs- i really cant wait for this conversation between them. :)
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  • From bloodshound on February 20, 2011
    sev's gonna be a role modle... cool.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on February 17, 2011
    omg Ive been too preoccupied with sleepless! such a good star to this plot. love it please update soon!


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  • From ANON - Cookies_B on February 14, 2011
    i really like the concept of this story!!! it's so interesting that everyone is different but dumbledore (lol he's still sneaky and keeping things to himself) i wonder what the relationship between ron, hermione and harry be like =O what was their relation with their harry like? can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kit on February 10, 2011
    oh! I like this new story a lot. I can actually feel harry's awkwardness and resentment to his situation. To be forced into another world where you must destroy voldemort again, when others have already failed, and if you succeed there is no promise that you'll find your way back home.
    Though it seems like harry might be on to something about it being strange that Potter(1) killed himself. Was it a murder from within the order of the phoenix?
    I'm interested in hearing about how much more different this alternate universe is to harry's original one. Were remus and tonks killed off in this version? I'll just have to wait and see.
    Hopefully harry will find a way to get back to his own universe. if he does....would it be possible that he returns after years have passed since he killed his Voldemort?
    I'm excited for the next chapter! :]
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  • From bloodshound on February 10, 2011
    Yay! new Loma story. *settles in to watch and read.
    No sex or romance this time out? Thats new.
    *awaits further developments with interest.
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  • From ANON - puresilver on February 09, 2011
    I'm completely in love with this new WIP you've started. Even if it doesn't end up being a romance---ish fic. This is such a unique plot twist. I can't wait for more. Good luck!
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