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Reviews for Healing Harry Potter

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  • From bloodshound on October 09, 2011
    Well, sucks to be well huh. Still, i suppose if you've never had it you don';t miss it. pity he and poppy can't have sprogs. Their kids would probably have been powerful.
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  • From bloodshound on October 07, 2011
    Short, Squat, and Scrawny... snickers
    yay! I det4ect the sweet scent of conclusion in the air. ^^
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  • From bloodshound on October 03, 2011
    wow, that's some kink thrown in the works... how is it welford never heard of magic... or for that matter displayed any?
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  • From bloodshound on September 14, 2011
    YAY looking good. now those who want to stay puppy but safe can and those who want to ditch the beast all together can do that too.
    Yes, those last two questions were very good ones.
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  • From bloodshound on September 04, 2011
    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY *happy dances all around you. cures for all.
    and with seemingly minimal side effects. ^^
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  • From bloodshound on August 23, 2011
    wow. Har's ggot serious balls to try this... i got the feeling there's going to be some sort of drama next chappie. There are so many variables when your dealing with blood, especially infected blood.
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  • From loisalcantara on August 22, 2011
    i'm soo happy for harry! i hope no complications arise during recovery.
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  • From bloodshound on July 29, 2011
    He proposed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *squueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
    And things are moving on to happiendingness. ^^
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  • From demonsangel on July 29, 2011
    Ok, first off, I must say that I really love this story. It's been a while since I lost track of things at one point and all but stopped reading anything. I started in again at chapter 14 last night. The story is still very good but there are some things I think need to be addressed as they tend to make things rather confusing.

    One of the things I am noticing a lot is missing words. It happens to all of us. We go through, typing things out as quickly as possible and miss putting in words now and then. Unfortunately, there are quite a few in almost every chapter. Another thing that also happens to all of us is putting the wrong words in. For example, putting "her" when you meant "him", "possible" when you meant "possibility."

    The two other things I noticed were minor, one is that in the chapter where they placed the bracelet on Yaxley you said that "the bracelet bracelet dampens nullifies" a persons magic. I would recommend only using one word, most likely nullifies as you said that it makes it so they cant use magic where dampening the magic would just make it weak. The other is that in chapter 22 Hermione asks Harry how much he weighs, when she already asked him in a previous chapter.

    Other then those simple things and some missing commas making it a bit confusing, this is a great story and I look forward to reading more. If you don't want to or have the time to go back and read through your chapters to find the missing mistakes, I would recommend asking for a beta in the forums. Keep up the amazing story work ^^
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  • From bloodshound on July 20, 2011
    YAY! they're hot onn the heals of a cure and Mio's getting engaged! bet on it. lalalallala. *dances around joyously.
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  • From bloodshound on July 07, 2011
    oh poor draco, that was seriously rough. I hope that potion works.
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  • From bloodshound on June 29, 2011
    Not much to say about this chappie except that it's hopeful and I'm glad that Harry and deaco can now be more unrestrained together. very silver lining.
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  • From bloodshound on June 16, 2011
    well, he held true to his convictions... such they are, at least. Still, his bro's probably going to be pissed. Hmmm, werewofl blood as a weapon *ponders.
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  • From bloodshound on June 09, 2011
    mr MoM has several screws loose.
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  • From bloodshound on June 02, 2011
    plot, plots, plotting and more plotting. It's a pity Harry is left onn the sidelines but tings are starting to move now. ^^
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